Hmm, I'm not sure. Not really a huge fan of the manga/anime look, sorry.

[url=http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/204/5/8/assignment_8__space_pilot_by_ranarh-d58a005.jpg]What do you think about the middle one?[/url] Although I might change the back story a little and make him a human with a few extras (cortesy of Dr. Light), instead of a cyborg. Alos, might change the "Starbeam arm-cannon" to "Stargun" or "Starbeam hand-gun".