@Sickle-cell: He's accepted then. @kittenlover: I'm sorry, but her abilities overlap a bit too much with another character's([url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/677925]here[/url]). You can keep some fire stuff, such as the flaming sword, but you need to make some changes so it's not as close. I'd take out the ability to light herself on fire(though the ability to control fire, and only fire and not the other stuff, is okay). Controlling anything to do with heat, though, um, is way too broad honestly and it kind of renders the other character not very capable of fighting. I want everyone's character to be able to win fights through some means if they come up. Also I'm not... completely sure about telepathy just because it kind of renders secrets sort of out in the open, but I'll think about it. @Card Captor: While I don't see any problem with your Doll Master, I'm a little bit confused about what you mean by "weaponize his own soul" for your Doll. @Kirinos Solstice: I'm fairly certain the slave trade was dead by this time in real-world Victorian Europe, which this is based on. I'd prefer if you involved them in something else if you wanted them to be shady.