[quote=Joos]
Craft - Love it, love it, love it! I like how you have portrayed the father. And how the Gors bandage your wounds. That's exactly what they would do even in the heat of battle.But, of course, technically speaking his mother wasn't murdered and he knows that. She was caught in the crossfire, an innocent civilian who was not supposed to be there. But that's a minor nit.You are accepted.
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Awesome, I'll make sure to keep hat in mind!