It looks good to me, but there's a lot going on as is often the case in an advanced RP in early game. Everyone needs to feel comfortable to point out mistakes and contradictions in mine or anyone's posts before they grow into thorny paradox weeds which are difficult to uproot. If you notice problems or things being overlooked don't hesitate to bring it up.

On that note, Delphi is on my mind. She's just the outlier right now so it may take longer to work her into the mainplot. Until then continue posting her story so I know where she is and what she's up to.

My creativity is tanked right now, but tomorrow morning, coffee willing, I will set what is shaping up to be our most important scene, the Boggart's Hole. Post your ideas for a fairy bar tonight and tomorrow and I'll try to incorporate them.