[quote=The Blue Sylph] Hana: Very interesting character as I expected! I quite like Hana, however, I feel like she needs to be toned down a little. At the moment the Heir of the Mitsumine is young and barely coming into his responsibilities... thus him and by extension, his entourage have a lot of leveling up to do. And as she stands, Hana seems like she's already the ultimate version of what she is. I do want her to have the talent and promise to be one of the greatest economist of the realm, however, I don't want her to already be there by the beginning. [/quote] Hm. Glad to know I need to done her down rather than scale her abilities up. That way I know what I can grow up into. Okay, how to tone her down: Reducing her immediate financial savvy and strengthening Master Tenzin's hold over her. Ultimately she is a subordinate to a long-standing Mitsumine servant, and she's an adopted outsider to boot. While she has been nominally accepted, she's withholding major trade secrets from the clan, and thats a serious point of contention.