[quote=Zordon]
Okay. I'll be going into detail about my power soon. Aside from that, is my CS satisfactory?
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First female prisoner! Woo!
Looks pretty good so far, I think the character interaction would be interesting, a couple of things though...
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[*]Why was she killing people with superpowers, is there a reason for it, could you explain that or go into detail with it?[/*] 
[*]Not so sure about the necklace inhibitor, I think they only come in bracelet form. It's not a big problem though, so unless Soul says anything about it, I would just ignore this part.[/*]
[*]Try not to make your power too OP. [/*]
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Other than that, I think you're good to go.