[quote=ArcanicNeon] Ok then. and about your CS. It's good... Buuuut can be improved. for one, the ability. I'm guessing what you mean by electricity/lightning is electrokinesis or Electricity Generation. and your appearance. I better say this now and add it too the rules. But could you use an IRL photo. I don't care who, but it be easier to work with. an be a tiny bit more descriptive with the written form? and the personality needs to be bigger. If you have skype we can chat and talk about your character. [/quote] Essentially electricity generation. Also, sorry but I'm not using an IRL photo. I can draw him from a few different angles and stuff but Matt and Amie are OCs and it's far easier to work with them when I can draw them, and I'm not going to creep through photos of other people online to find one similar to my character. Not sure what else you need for the description.