Well, we can state our opinions on your sheet if you want, so you can improve it once Queen arrives.

I suggest you expand on your military structure further, like maybe include ships, army divisions, and other military details you'd want to us to know. Also, you could include stuff like religion, economy, government in your sheet, to mold your faction better.

Well those are my suggestions on your sheet, not assuming a gm's position or anything. :P