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NOT DONE/ just the basics so far/ will editMidori Shiba18FemaleMidori has snow white hair, flowing from her scalp down to her lower back. She sports some bangs that ends in a "WW" design just before her eyelids. Her eye color is a sharp blood red, and she towers over most people with a height of 6'2. She has a slender body figure, and her skin is of a light peach hue.Midori is a vicious and cunning shifter that can stand up for herself if the need arises. Her share this deadly trait. Her personality was shaped by all that has happened in her earlier life. There simply wasn't enough 'good' in her early life to turn her into an enthusiastic girl that skips around while humming songs. One should consider themself fortunate to make friends with such a woman. But once a person makes that friendship work, Midori can place her trust within said person. Also, quick tip: she will probably prefer women as friends over males. She has little to no interest in dating.Her vectors can only go so far; up to 2 meters.If any one of her two vectors are cut off, she may enter a comatose state, and has a chance of death.If stained with any colored liquids (like blood), the liquid will make the vector visible.
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Alright, I have one problem with this... The ability. It's just screaming ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED. Please, can you rewrite it to something original? I'm perfectly ok with telekinesis or something of the sorts, but please change it.