[quote=Nariata]
Iridious, welcome aboard. Slim Shady, even though i hate the similarities with Revan, i will welcome you aboard.Jasonhero, I hate to say this but i would like you to re-write your CS, It's not that it's written bad, it's just that it feels out of place in the scheme of things. You dont have to change everything, just add some continuity to it.
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What exactly is out of place? So I can target that and fix it?