[quote=Nariata]
The age in comparison for what he's accomplished for starters. This "One fateful day, a droid patrol led by some trandoshan mercs. Before the two could react, Jason's master was shot dead." When i read this i have a very hard time imagining what happened on that day, a key point in your characters history. The fact that he spent so much time with the commandos, never being sent back to the temple after being saved. How he still calls himself a Jedi even though he has not had any contact with the order in so long.I want detail, i want to know what your characters been through. I want to have a feel for how your character will react to what is planned. A lot of your history leaves much to be desired, and i hope you can flesh out your character more. ;)And Slim, he fits in the scheme of things ;)
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Gotcha, I'll hop right on that