[quote=Zerofighter] Base Character: Lex Luthor & Tony StarkName: Alexander Anthony LuthorAlias: Founder of a new worldGender: MAge: 30sAppearance (description/picture): Looks like Lex luthor, with Tony's beard and mustache, and a arc reactorCostume: Wears a suit, his batlle suit resembles the Iron man armor, but he arc reactor using kryptonite radiationHero/Villain: anti-villainPersonality/motives: Corrupt, and calculating. Luthor has one of the most powerful companies on earth. His endless funds allows him to break bail, hire the best lawyers, make the best weapons, but he also wants the power of a god. Powers: He has basic combat skills with out his suit, but the suit increases his strength enough to push back a train. It also gives him flight speed of mach 3, He can fire normal or kryptonite repulsor blasts, rockets, a flamethrower. The Armor is made of Adamantium.History: His adoptive father,Howard Stark, being a great weapons maker, and founder of Stark Industries adopted Luthor at a young age. Luthor was a genius growing up, easily rivaling his adoptive father when he reached his twnties. After a fatal Accident, Howard died, and Luthor came out on top. He saw his father as unambitious and decded to rename his father's company, and show he could surpass his father.Base Character: Manchester Black & Jean GreyName: Mancheter GreyAlias: The Union MarvelGender: MAge: 21Appearance (description/picture): has long red hair, a union jack tattooed on his chest. He wears a green trench coat, and black pants.Costume: noneHero/Villain: Anti heroPersonality/motives: Manchester is kind to mutants, and fights for their rights. He believes humans, and mutants should be equal. However he doesnt feel the same for villains. He believes villains, no matter who they are deserve to die for their crimes.Powers: Telepath, and telekinetic. His telepath, allows him to read almost any mind, and even create illusions that are almost real, His telekinesis is powerful. He threw a villain around like a ragdoll once, and even said he could take down a buildingHistory: He was born a mutant, and at aoung age witnesses his sistwe being murdered, even with his testamony, the guy got off scott free. That day his power awoke, and the man was dead. Sense then he became a hero.however his methods are looked down upon. He will show mercy though in rare cases. And ever sense he was a child, he would have nightmares of a white phoenix, but when he had them they didnt seem like nightmares [/quote] I like these, I think they are interesting characters. My only criticisms are that Luthor's armor shouldn't be adamantium, maybe adamantium reinforced steel since a full suit of adamantium would be expensive, even for Luthor, and almost impossible to get enough to build the whole suit. I do like the idea of it being powered by kryptonite though. My main issue was that even though I don't want to kill off characters they still need to be killable so that they aren't unstopable. Manchester's telekinesis should be powerful, but can't reach its full power unless a certain condition is met, maybe extreme emotional trauma is its trigger.