[quote=NewSun] Just got around to reading it. I like it a lot, I feel like Evarest will have a lot of dark secrets. One thing I will say, however, is it may be beneficial to change 'Law' and 'Justice' to something a bit more selfish, such as 'Obedience'. I feel like instead of wanting people to uphold law, he actually wants people simply to obey the rules he places on things. I love the idea that he is a massive egotistical god who hackysacks people who don't do what he says, but glorifies those who do. We just need to make it a little more obvious! Other than that, i'll get working on Graphics for him and Orfai. [/quote] Well Justice isn't inherently good. Justice is getting what you deserve by the standard in question. It simply means that he upholds a specific code. You might have noticed his codes of law are very difficult to actually keep. He's managed to get a good rep with the world though. Which he certainly uses to his advantage.