Feedback is appreciated!!!!! --- [hider=Appearance][img=http://i1153.photobucket.com/albums/p516/NarayanK/nathan_zps3156fabb.jpg] (This is a 20 minute sketch; WILL be updated!)[/hider] [quote=Nathaniel "Apollo" Terotrax][i]"Got a problem? Blast it away with some freestyle, ya?! [B]WA-HOOOO~!!![/B]"[/i][/quote] [center][b][u]Name[/u][/b][/center] [center]Nathaniel "Apollo" Terotrax[/center] [center][b][u]Age[/u][/b][/center] [center]20[/center] [center][b][u]Gender[/u][/b][/center] [center]Male[/center] [center][b][u]Species/Race[/u][/b][/center] [center]Human[/center] [center][b][u]Height/Weight[/u][/b][/center] [center]182 cm / 145 pounds[/center] [center][b][u]Powers[/u][/b][/center] [i]Air Flow![/i] - Terotrax uses oxygen as his main resource for his abilities. [i]Jazz Blue![/i] - Terotrax, who literally lived with music for fifteen whole years, has an insane amount of energy within him, as well as one heck of a carefree attitude. While some people dislike the random bursts of energy he tends to let out of himself, Terotrax has a ton of stamina within him, making him an efficient worker in activities such as public service works. In combat, he is able to use a whole variety of abilities without tiring himself out. [i]Hip-Hop Style![/i] - With his love for hip-hop, Terotrax is quite flexible. This makes him quite good at physical activities, and combined with his high stamina, makes him an agile energy bar that just does not know when to quit loving music. [i]Hyper-Kinetic-DJ-Mode[/i] - A strange "mode" Terotrax claims he turns on every now and then. He is able to "remix" the voices of people he captures through his boombox using his own voicebox. This allows him to technically bring singers like Freddie Mercury onto a stage, though finding someone that actually looks like Freddie would be harder. Terotrax is also able to collect and remix any other kind of noises as well, allowing him to imitate various noises. These noises can also be remixed to match his speech pattern, which explains why he sometimes talks like Optimus Prime. [i]Turbo MAX System[/i] - Terotrax is able to toggle on and off the Double T-Turbo Max System, which is a magic-powered system that empowers his boombox's abilities using his own oxygen. The more he uses the D.T.M.S., the more oxygen he uses up, often tiring him out a little more quickly then he usually does. [center][b][u]Abilities (Terotrax & Boombox)[/u][/b][/center] [i]Remix Haymaker![/i] - A common ability Terotrax uses even without his boombox. Terotrax prepares a strange idle stance and intentionally gets hit by anything sent toward him (a punch, projectile, etc.). Gathering the air knocked out of him to one of his fists, he proceeds to immediately counterattack with a flying haymaker punch. This can also be performed while [i]This Is Destiny[/i] is activated, and is one of the only aggressive abilities he has. The Remix Haymaker does not work if the attack Terotrax receives is too harsh or is not a proper attack at all. [i]Blast Force[/i] - Terotrax holds his boombox in front of him. He then proceeds to let the boombox fire compressed soundwaves directly at targets in designated lines. The soundwaves, which look like small rockets, then explode in anything it comes to contact first. The explosion is non-lethal, only producing a large pushing factor in all directions, but knocks away the target(s) with an immense pushback. Terotrax frequently uses this ability on his father to get his lunch money, but is willing to use it immediately whenever something needs to be apprehended. [indent][i]Blast Force MAX[/i] - Terotrax holds his boombox in front of him. He then gathers up his willpower and energy and, with due focus and respect, fire two massive rockets towards his targets. The knockback distance is massively increased.[/indent] [i]Rock Force[/i] - With his love for rock music, Terotrax transforms his boombox into a playable, portable rock guitar, emitting soundwaves that push away projectiles sent toward him, as well as things and people around him. The heavier he plays his music, the more powerful these soundwaves are. This is usually used to defend himself or others in need of defense. [indent][i]Rock Force MAX[/i] - With his love for rock music, Terotrax transforms his boombox into a playable, portable rock guitar with extra amplifiers on it. The soundwaves emitted destroys incoming projectiles and magic spells. Terotrax has the choice to play different notes that now perform different actions, allowing him to either drag in people and living creatures toward him, push them away from him, or both at the same time.[/indent] [i]This Is Destiny![/i] - With his love for hybrid, orchestral music, Terotrax constructs two power gloves out of his boombox. These huge gloves give him increased striking force, but at the cost of his usual agile movements. To compensate for his lost speed, Terotrax's gloves are able to have their palms extend, creating two small shields for him. The power gloves are immune to magic, but [i]will[/i] transfer a small amount of damage to Terotrax. [indent][i]This Is MAX Destiny![/i] - With his love for hybrid, orchestral music, Terotrax constructs two power gloves out of his boombox. While no additional gadgets are added, Terotrax is now able to use his usual agile movements. His power gloves still retain the same system, though they are a little sturdier than their regular forms.[/indent] [i](MAX Only) House of Terror! [/i] - Terotrax lets a small device fall out of the boombox. The instant moment the device is lands on the surface of anything, the interior of what appears to be a rich household's living room is instantly constructed! The room is filled with active gadgets, including moving floor tiles (there is a single, solid tile behind all of them), exploding refrigerators, and exploding stuff pretty much everywhere. While this can be used offensively, Terotrax sometimes traps himself on purpose to use the house as a temporary bunker. The House of Terror automatically disappears after a minute passes by. [i](MAX Only) Final Countdown![/i] - Unrevealed. It is apparently Terotrax's strongest ability, and has the possibility of killing him should he ever use it. [center][b][u]Items[/u][/b][/center] [i]Nega-Blue Boombox[/i] - A strange boombox that utilizes both magic and technology. It is Terotrax's favored item in nearly all circumstances. (It even as a pencil box loaded inside it.) [i](Artifact) Unknown Necklace[/i] - An exotic necklace worn around Terotrax's neck. While it seems like the usual "bling-bling-rich-thing" kind of item, however, it is actually an artifact he was given by a mysterious, hooded man. This necklace, when worn, detects those who are in sorrow at a wide radius, often letting him go up to those who are depressed and sing a song or two for their sake. It has shown no other abilities so far. [b][u][center]Weaknesses[/center][/u][/b] Terotrax has high stamina, a flexible body, and tons of gadgets within his boombox. However, he tends to be predictable whenever he gets aggressive, and his defensive mechanisms do not last forever. Terotrax is also colorblind, and can only see the world in red. To compensate for his colorblindness, Terotrax wears glasses he designed for himself, allowing him to properly see colors with it. (He does not wear glasses in battle) [center][b][u]Personality[/u][/b][/center] Terotrax is exuberant, joyful, and is nearly always optimistic, and for some strange reason, loves to tick his father off. He believes that through his music, he would be able to create an unseen harmony between all species. While he does look a little scary, his looks are overshadowed by his happy and friendly nature. Unlike most of his family members, who have committed suicide due to unknown reasons, Terotrax loves being with anything alive and well. As long as he sees a heart somewhere within anything, he treats them with equality. Terotrax believes that families are important to one's life, hence the reason why he treasures his father so much. Terotrax is rarely unamused or angry, but when he is, he can be scarier than anyone else in the academy. Background: TBA Study: Basic Core Classes - Science, History, English Electives - Band, Computers, Sports/P.E. --- EDIT: [quote=Sukui] Okay, i'll change everything.I had no time to look over because my sleep schedule was approaching at the moment i finished. [/quote] oki. o.o