[quote=Azure Sea] the order wouldn't just kill a family cause a member of the family developed magical abilities they would be ordered to register that they have a magic user(s) in their family if not registered they would be labeled outlaws to be hunted by the order, also please put a limit on the offensive and defensive abilities as all 3 abilites you char has can make him a OP'd bording god-mod char MonsieurShade [/quote] Gotcha, expect my edit shortly. Though I was under the assumption magic was still a kind of secret and that civilians aware of magic users might be killed, hence the Hawkins family murder. John's dad discovered magic when he was sent to kill someone who turned out to be an outlaw, not because of John himself. John was going to be taken because he would be more useful alive than dead, especially if pre-trained. Ah well, i'm not gonna quibble, let the editing commence!