If you read previous I am letting people post their CS's today and of them I am choosing two to be the last who join the game. I will be bringing in more people but that won't be for a long time down the road.

Sauron - So your character just roams around killing... what, everything? Besides a dark legend what are you? Split personality disorder? A girl wanting vengence? Run away from the monolith? 
Avan - I like the story, I think the weapons are a bit odd seeing as you can only use them one at a time when one is shoulder mounted and the other requires one hand. Seems like you're putting yourself at a disadvantage.
Zero - I agree that you've shown an aptitude for writing and I am just asking for a picture, no need for it to be exact. [hider] http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-_6cnVDArvZE/UNB-1c0ySNI/AAAAAAAACE8/S1z0ICfhCEw/s1600/Robot%20Knight%201.jpg [/hider] Look at that, just did the leg work for you.
Raven- We are going to stick with about 10 rockets, once used you will need to find new ones of course.