FaithsRose said
Oh no another post.......:O Sorry :P I figured four in between was enough xD On the other hand I'm off out for a bit ^^ Will try and be back on later, but depends whether I can keep my eyes open -.- As I always say feel free to abandon my characters if you are interacting with them, I understand its a pain to be tied up if there is other stuff happening ^^ Have fun! Will check back in when able to :) (Tomorrow evening at the very latest :P)

Baiiiiii. 3:

On another note, I may post on the IC soon. (Still waitin for Totem to get accepted lolololol jk ill get to posting now)

@NK, I think i got Ninja'd (if my definition of being ninja'd is correct (posting too slow so another person posts before you but you don't notice it so when you post stuff doesn't make sense)). Should i let it slip or should i change my latest post?

Legion020 said
@NK, I think i got Ninja'd (if my definition of being ninja'd is correct (posting too slow so another person posts before you but you don't notice it so when you post stuff doesn't make sense)). Should i let it slip or should i change my latest post?

If you feel like it's necessary, you may do so. However, I have edited my post to kinda match you guys' posts, so don't worry about it too much.

Going to try and go catch up on IC. May or may not being going back out with my roommate. We'll see.

Edit: And Kiwi is accepted. Totem is denied. >.>; lulz

HylianRose said
Going to try and go catch up on IC. May or may not being going back out with my roommate. We'll see.Edit: And Kiwi is accepted. Totem is denied. >.>;

Aw, come on, screw Science and embrace Inception

Posted at the IC. Hopefully, no one ninja'd meh.

Going back out. BAI.

HylianRose said
Going back out. BAI.

Iab.

Animal said
The one sexy nurse I wouldn't like to be treated by

SHOULDN'T HER SURNAME BE ABURAME THO

sorry i couldnt get on today I did some airsoft today and got home pretty late and tired so can somebody give me a little feedback on what happend since like page 12

liferusher said
sorry i couldnt get on today I did some airsoft today and got home pretty late and tired so can somebody give me a little feedback on what happend since like page 12

Nothing happened except for ppl dyin lots of stuff.

Ryuu lost his lips' virginity (i need to stop saying that) to a similar-to-2D girl, Bael and Allan went all Megatron VS. Optimus Prime, Lily turned into a loli 16-year-old, Terotrax got punched by Lolily (c wut i did thar), David was about to go nuts, Crash had this freaky percentage gimmick going up, Cyrus just went wtf, and finally, Carmen did the "kick" and activated Inception, causing that stupid topblade thing to keep spinning. Oh yeah, and the Queen of Hell said hello.

Everyone else just went omg.

That about sums it up.

EDIT:

Nero said
SHOULDN'T HER SURNAME BE ABURAME THO

IT SHOULD BE DR. MARIO HARDCORE NURSE.

liferusher said
sorry i couldnt get on today I did some airsoft today and got home pretty late and tired so can somebody give me a little feedback on what happend since like page 12

While NarayanK's summary covers everything quite nicely, I actually suggest reading the IC when you get the time. The posts were AWESOME yesterday, and I got quite a lot of laughs and whatnot from it all. :) You won't want to miss it~~!

Theobromine said
While NarayanK's summary covers everything quite nicely, I actually suggest reading the IC when you get the time. The posts were AWESOME yesterday, and I got quite a lot of laughs and whatnot from it all. :) You won't want to miss it~~!

Specifically NK's posts with Ryuu.

ARIGATOUHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Apperance: Green eyes, black hair in pigtails, Has a large scarr on her back, is extremly pale looking 120 lbs, 5,4 ft



Name: Liam Ross

Age : 18

Gender: Female

Species/Race : Zombie

Powers :
Necromancer: A necromancer could heal her and make her look like her old self again and repair fallen of limbs and such.
(could be filled in by another person if he/she wants to)

Super Strength: As a zombie, she is not limited to the amount of muscle power she uses as a human, as humans cannot use 100% of their muscle power. She is able to use 100% this however does damage to her limbs and bones.

Immortality: She just lives on and can't die for a second time by ageing, She can however be killed by destroying the brains.

Infect: When someone died she can bite him or her and they will become zombies.

Weaknesses:
Fire: She is very flameable.
Rotting: She rots sometimes because her body isn't working that well. rotting also causes her muscles to break down so she would need to get her necromancer again.
Sun: Her body dries up by the sun after a while making it skinny.

Personality: Liam is lazy and sleeps a lot during the day because she likes the night more and can't really walk outside when the sun is shining. She likes to go out with friends at night or do something fun anything that is not boring.Liam is most of the time cheerfull but doesn't really think when she says something stupid to someone. Her zombie instincts may come up when she is around dead people. Playing pranks on people is one of her favorite things to do when she is bored.

Background: The only thing that she remembered was that she was running across the street as a bus hit her. She died in a instant but came back to life before she knew it, Nothing had changed from before the only thing that was difrent was a boy hanging above her. Her id read Liam Ross assuming it was her name she followed the boy with no hesitation. He made her food and shelter for the time being he looked pretty shocked from wat ge saw before and what he did to her. With a calm look she looked at the boy that looked rather confused and just wanted to test if he could bring somebody back to life once again. A few months later it became clear that she had indeed became a zombie with a cold lifeless body. Whenever they would could see a dead person near the girl she reacted all creepy and she wanted to bite him for no reason it looked like she became possesed by something.As they progressed further living with eachother the boy could do more spells and other magicial things as necromancer. As Liam would just sit and watch him the boy still needed to go to school again and just couldn't leave the girl behind the whole time do he sended her to a school for special people. Where she could hopefully make some friends just like her and someday return to him her only family.

Study: She only takes math because of her sleeping times. And she likes to watch scary movies with people.

Theobromine said
While NarayanK's summary covers everything quite nicely, I actually suggest reading the IC when you get the time. The posts were AWESOME yesterday, and I got quite a lot of laughs and whatnot from it all. :) You won't want to miss it~~!

I read for a bit but i just can't read it in one go. i am pretty tired of working the whole day everyday so that makes it a lot better.

I'm not a co gm or anything, but I'm quite worried about her ability to infect others with the simple act of biting...

Nero said
I'm not a co gm or anything, but I'm quite worried about her ability to infect others with the simple act of biting...

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Nintendo Directs are constantly hyping me up.

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liferusher said
Apperance: Green eyes, black hair in pigtails, wears black hoodie with a grey shirt under it and black shorts with black sneakers, 120 lbs, 5,4 ftName: Liam RossAge : 18Gender: FemaleSpecies/Race : ZombiePowers : Necromancer: A necromancer could heal her and make her look like her old self again and repair fallen of limbs and such.(could be filled in by another person if he/she wants to)Super Strength: As a zombie, she is not limited to the amount of muscle power she uses as a human, as humans cannot use 100% of their muscle power. She is able to use 100%Immortality: She just lives on and can't die for a second time by ageing, She can however be killed by destroying the brains.Infect: Can make someone a zombie by biting them.Weaknesses:Fire: She is very flameable.Rotting: She rots sometimes because her body isn't working that well.Sun: Her body dries up by the sun after a while making it skinny.Personality: She doesn't like to go out when it's day she mostly sleeps by then and does her things in the night. She likes to be around other people and wants to make it clear that she is with them(shouting and stuff like that)Background: When she was 18 she got hit by a car making her instantly dead. A necromancer came to bring her back alive, What the necromancer exactly did is unknown but She wacked up near the school Athalia. Her body was cold and she couldn't hear her heart beating anymore. The necromancer explained everything and left and gave her a number to call on her phone if she needed help repairing her body. The necromancer send her to a special college for people that were not that normal to most of the people and had already made a call to the school that she would be studing in this school from now on. She didn't have a choice the Necromancer saved her life she couldn't just walk away and try to pick up her old life again It would be pretty difficultStudy: She only takes math because of her sleeping times. And she likes to watch scary movies with people.

Zombies! :D Strange choice of species. I'd like to provide some feedback.

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Liam Ross

The zombie bite is overpowered. As much as how awesome zombies biting idiot humans is, it is a generally unhealthy ability to have in this kind of player-centered roleplay. I recommend you to either delete it completely, or replace it with a different, unique ability that won't exactly guarantee stuff like zombification.

I personally think Liam's super strength kinda conflicts with the apparent fact that her limbs can, indeed, fall off. Are the limbs also strengthened by default, and fall off in certain circumstances? Or is there a certain system to it? I highly suggest that you compare those two traits again and come up with a decision.

I usually don't point out things in the Personality category, but this is something that you really need to consider. Most of the characters will let their characters sleep at night, meaning that many characters would wind up being inactive until a timeskip to the next day. This means that there will be a severely limited amount of characters to interact with, and that usually means that Liam would not be used as often as other characters. It's just something I'd like you think about, and if it's fine with you, I'll accept the personality.

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With that said, I'm gonna go improve my Totem CS. I'm gonna show HylianRose how awesome it could be.

NarayanK said
.With that said, I'm gonna go improve my Totem CS. I'm gonna show HylianRose how awesome it could be.

@ Suggestions, what he said.

@Totem ...-intense glare-

yea it might be a bit overpowered that biting I have to think of something else and im not that much on anymore since I can work fulltime and it isn't really night but more like dawny and sometimes during the day by waking up from schoolbells and stuff gonna edit it right away.

Just adding some small helpful things to your CS's review, by the way.

When she was 18 she got hit by a car making her instantly dead.

You could re-word this to: "When she was eighteen, she was hit by a car and died instantly."

A necromancer came to bring her back alive, What the necromancer exactly did is unknown but She wacked up near the school Athalia.

She *woke* up, actually.

There might be some other grammar-wise aspects that could be improved, but I have to go to a birthday party because my girlfriend forced me to do so. It will probably suck but oh well, a man has to endure such things.

See ya'll!