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THIS ROLE PLAY IS CLOSED TO NEW SUBMISSIONS.
The God Complex




An Original RP by

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Premise


The Erasure Program


Player-Created NPCs


Rules
I'm not too much of a stickler for rules, but I've got a few:

-I really want active players and, to me, that means participating in both the IC and OOC threads. Communicative players often make the best groups and provide the best chemistry for IC posts as well. If you can't be active, you should re-consider joining this RP.

-As an add on to the first, if you can't be on for an amount of time, let me know via PM or OOC thread. I know life comes up so I understand if you can't be on due to some emergency or some such.

-This is a mature RP so cussing, graphic scenes, and the like are perfectly fine by me. Romance is fine and even encouraged, but as per forum rules, take it to PM if you plan to get seriously hot and heavy.

-You are only able to have one main character. Starting off, I'll allow 2 NPC characters alongside your main, but you won't be able to introduce them until I give the word because the introduction phase is necessary to the plot.


Character Sheet



Approved Characters

icmasticc - Elton Devereaux
Alarei - Kiril Smirnov
Doctor Belasco - James Hart
Dannyel - Janet Stafford
MST3K 4ever - Russell Nash
YandereNoodle - Aurora Faye
Rockette - Simone Archambault
Gordian Nought - Xri S. T. Harley
Etherdrop - David
Welcome to the OOC! You may post your characters in this thread if you're interested. There will be a player cap, but rather than just announce it, I'm going to see how much interest there is and close off submissions when there are enough people or it's been open long enough, whichever comes first.

Also, I covered what was pertinent in the OOC, but if you have any other questions, I'll gladly answer them at this time. I was also serious about active players in the rules section. Active, to me, is participation in both OOC and IC and that has proven to foster the most favorable atmospheres.

On the subject of the NPC characters, just use the same character sheet for them except omit Personality and Writing Sample.

Hope all future players enjoy the ride, I've got a hell of a narrative planned! XD
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Name - Elton Devereaux

Age - 42

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Gender - Male

Personality - Despite having worked for the government as an Erasure Agent for quite some time, Elton Deveraux - an American male of Irish descent - does not possess the soldier-like persona. In fact, Elton's personality is most often described as bitter. Harboring a bevy of negative emotions, Elton rarely sees the happy or bright side of anything. While his social qualities firmly betray the image of an angry loner, his conversational dialogue is also laced with sharp-edged intention and acidic vulgarity. This is a man who very obviously carries events of the past on his back, but prefers not to open the bag to let others see exactly what creates the heft. In regards to his job, Elton takes his orders with a mocking, almost laid-back acceptance. To the outside eye, it appears as though he couldn't care less about being given the order for another Erasure or the victim of which has to suffer through the procedure. Suffice it to say, the job is usually the last thing on the older man's mind.

Overall though, Elton isn't an inherently bad person to know. He doesn't mind exchanging words with strangers and he'll become even more chatty amongst those that are familiar and don't even let him get a drink or two in him. While he isn't the bubbly, happy-go-lucky sunshine type, the aging man is mature in his disposition and blunt in his attitude. He's been through it over the years and it shows on his face and body while still enveloped in the sort honest aura you'd want in a person who watches your back for a living. Elton is rugged, weary, bitter, and, in his own words, none of these qualities slow him down one bit.

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May I inquire on the Erasure program's longevity? 20 years plus?

Just to historically serve and frame future main and NP character submissions.
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Sure. The year is 2265 and the Erasure program has been going strong for 50 years now.
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So many bronies... XD

Sup Ic, I'll be writing a character sheet sooner than later. Looking forward to rping with you soon.
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I can't stay away. I love the idea. May not be quite up to par, but I'll try ;D
Also, saving this spot for my CS
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Etherdrop said
So many bronies... XDSup Ic, I'll be writing a character sheet sooner than later. Looking forward to rping with you soon.


Been a long time Ether. Looking forward to RPing with you again as well.
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YandereNoodle said
I can't stay away. I love the idea. May not be quite up to par, but I'll try ;D
Also, saving this spot for my CS


Advanced isn't all that.. advanced, we just embellish and exaggerate a lot.
Just write like you normally would.

You'll do just fine!
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Glad you made it to the OOC, Rockette. Also, I agree with what you said.

Advanced isn't usually what people make it out to be. The main difference is that posts delve more into character development and general detail than the other tiers - embellishment and exaggeration just like Rockette said XDD.
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What nation is this based in?
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The setting for the RP is a highly fictionalized version of Chicago. It's only Chicago in name however, as the city has completely changed, expanded, and become even more technologically savvy than it already was. The nation would be America, however, characters can be from anywhere in the world and the setting won't be too important to the narrative at the moment.

Also, I'll say this while I'm at it. The reason the character sheet seems so sparse is because I feel that most things about characters should be revealed naturally through IC. So secrets, backgrounds, history, and all that should be revealed in some sort of conversation or maybe an introspective post from a player in the IC or whatever the case may be. Organic revelation is the best is what I'm saying lol.
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I'm quite intrigued by the idea, I may throw up a character sheet and see how things pan out, but I want to get word from another RP and see if I'm gonna join that one first.

I should get word by tonight or tomorrow...if not I'll join this one anyway.

It's very...Inception-esque. I like it.
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Man, site went down there for a moment.

Funny you should mention Inception, Fulsom XD. When I was fleshing this out, that movie also popped into my head. I'm hoping I did enough to differentiate it though because while I appreciate(read: loved) that movie, I don't think I'd participate in an RP based on it haha.
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Ah, that's gonna be happening for the next foreseeable few weeks while Mahz makes changes and updates to the site.

Haha, I know what you mean - I'm sure that once the RP starts we'll see the differences between the two almost immediately.
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Yeah, I know, it just sucks is all lol. It breaks up the flow and stuff. Not so much now because the IC hasn't started yet, but when it does, I'm just afraid site outages will kill momentum.

Yeah, Inception would be a difficult RP to pull off correctly in my opinion.
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^
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Screw it, I'm gonna begin working on a character sheet.
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That's the spirit !
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Name: Kiril Smirnov
Nickname: White Russian
Age: 27
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Gender: Male
Personality:
As of growing up, Kiril had remained to be quite introverted among his peers straight through into his adult years. It was during his recruitment into the Erasure Program as an agent that his superiors recognised his fondness for seclusion. This however didn’t change the fact that he worked well within a team; his often calculating efficiency and split second decision making were a deciding factor for the success of many missions throughout his career as an Erasure Operative. Interpersonally, Kiril is a peaceful heart, speaking only short spells of words with those he isn’t close to. However, it’s not a dismissive taciturnity which keeps him from talking, but merely a bashful nature.

He is a man of an acquired taste, and has an almost obsessive and compulsive desire for routine. Although ambidextrous Kiril will only drink scotch out of his right hand, fire a gun with his left, only smoke β€œHuff β€˜n Puff” cigarettes and triple knot the laces of his shoes. When asked about these minor inconveniences he responded that it made him enjoy life that little bit more. To indulge in a ritual allows oneself to retain some semblance of normalcy in a world which seems so superficial and self-destructive,

Writing Sample:


Writing sample is a copy+paste from a previous Writing Example for a Mass Effect themed Role Play...Just thought I'd use this one seeing as I made it only a few short days ago...and I really don't want to write another Writing Sample without any context >.<
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It'll be easier if I make comments on sheets as they pop up, so I'll begin with this one.

Firstly, thank you for hiding that extremely large image Alarei XD. Lots of people don't do that until it's pointed out. While I do like the idea of the straight-laced, routine-oriented character(every RP needs one I suppose), my only worry is that the introverted aspect will turn into an anti-social trait. You've stated within that he can still work within a team however, so I do expect him to take part in active conversation. Suffice it to say, I won't badger you about the hated "Loner" persona unless it shows its ugly head.

It's fine for Writing Samples to be excerpts from other RPs, as long as it is recent. For others, if you need context, just write a minimum three paragraphs involving your character on a typical day(i.e. not performing an Erasure). I'm only using the sample to get an idea of writing styles and, in some cases, determining if people will indeed be able to at least meet the minimum standard.

In any case, I like the character Alarei and I think he'll fill a role on the main cast. Therefore, Kiril Smirnov is accepted.

I'll be doing this with each and every sheet as they appear(permitting I'm not at work of course). If there is a problem with the sheet, I'll obviously let you know and you'll have a chance to fix things before I shut down submissions. For now though, keep'em coming!
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