Great! I am glad you enjoyed the read minus the generic appearance and all. That was really the only thing that I felt stuck with, even by the time I finished the post, [i]and[/i] after reading it over several times. Just wasn't sure how I wanted to describe her appearance, and went with something a bit boring. Will more than likely go ahead and figure something better in the actual IC post. I am no fashion expert, so describing personal attire and specific stylings is a bit of a weak point.

For the misunderstanding portion, maybe if the fast-flyers response to Iona's storm talents were spoken in a more joking manner, there may have been no confusion as to not being dangerous. Iona did put in a little tease amongst her words, which were directed towards them originally. Might go and edit that in, if that is alright. I agree that Iona should show a greater maturity and experience that I hope flourishes throughout the RP. Either way, there will be a contrasting difference between her and Crispin.

By the way, would it be alright if I posted a quick image for reference as to what style I was more or less imagining for Iona, yet just couldn't describe for the life of me. Not sure if it will be too extravagant, but if allowed maybe I can customize or tone down the look.