Curious, will there be any Chuunin exams?

Yeah there will be! Ideas for it I dunno but it should be harder.

Ha. Nice post Insomnia.
Guess I'll wait on the meeting to start then.

Thanks hahah, your posts give me good material to work with.

Masaki I must've missed your last post so I've just edited my last post with a response.

Also, curious, are you European?

I may not be able to get many posts up for the next few days. I am studying for a big exam and I am doing some things on my thread. If anything is urgent, please PM me (and you are all invited on my thread as well).

Durnehviir said
Also, curious, are you European?

Me? No. Are you?

@LillyLove, after the mission can my character join your team if there's room since their both from the Rain Village?

Insomnia said
Me? No. Are you?

Canadian then?
Just noticed you have European typing mannerisms.

Durnehviir said
Canadian then?Just noticed you have European typing mannerisms.

Nope.
Huh. Is that a bad thing?

I hope you're still accepting character applications.

Appearance:
Name: Takahiro Uchiha

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Village: Konohagakure

Village Rank(Genin, Chunin, Etc.): Jounin

Ninja Rank(S-Rank being the highest and deadliest.): S Rank

Normal Release: Yin-Yang, Fire, Wind
Kekkei Genkai/Tota Release: Kurayami(custom dark kekkei tota), Blaze(basically evolved version of fire)

Tools(Optional):


Biography:
Takahiro was born into the Uchiha Clan as a noble; his ancestors were famed aristocrats in the clan itself. His parents were skilled users of the Sharingan - both had already awakened the Mangekyo before he was born. At an early age, Takahiro found that he was exceptionally talented at doing just about anything; his ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu prowess were far above his age. This led his parents to often boast about him to others; his parents being not the most humble, also called him the genius that came only once in a century. Other parents tried to boast back; that their children were also quite talented. But whenever Takahiro took part in competitions against those children, he always won with a perfect score - whilst not even trying. The other children felt inadequate compared to him, and Takahiro always offered to help them.

Takahiro graduated from the Academy at the age of five. During the time when he was a genin, his skills were sharpened immensely; almost to the point where he could be considered an actual threat to inexperienced jounin. His genin group was captured while on one mission by jounin sent from Shinobi Republic, and the jounin-sensei of his group was tortured for potential information, though he would not yield. During this time, Takahiro awakened his Sharingan(which immediately had three tomoe) to face this difficult circumstance, and proceeded to use his newfound abilities to their fullest, killing the jounins with the help of his team and proceeded to flee alongside his teammates. However, backup for the Shinobi Republic jounin had already arrived, and proceeded to kill one of his teammates and his jounin-sensei, leading Takahiro to awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan and kill the attackers. However, he fell unconscious from fatigue soon after reaching Konoha.

Takahiro mastered his Sharingan at the age of six, and proceeded to enlist in the chunin exams. He easily progressed through the exam without much difficulty, and when it came to the final part of the chunin exams, he decided to reveal a kekkei-tota he had been training. His opponent was a Hyuga Clan member, who had awakened the Byakugan and could be considered a genius as well. As the Hyuga member prepared to activate the 'Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms' technique, Takahiro summoned a dark katana into his hand as a dark aura started to emanate from him, the crowd holding their breath in anticipation for what was going to happen next. The Hyuga tried to attack him, but Takahiro instantly vanished and appeared behind him, sheathing his katana back into its sheath. Deep diagonal lacerations were found on the Hyuga's chest that ruptured every weak point in his ribs and chest, causing immense blood loss and were inches away from what would have been a sliced heart.

Takahiro became a chunin after that fight(at the age of 7), and engaged on medium-high ranked missions quite frequently. He strove to control the destructive power he withheld, and spent the next five years honing his skills in all areas of shinobi training. By the end of the five years, he had almost mastered the abilities of his Mangekyo Sharingan, and had obtained a great proficiency with his Kekkei Tota, to the point where he would be considered one of the best jounins in Konohagakure. He was promoted to the rank of a jounin subsequently.

The rest of what he was doing after that is kept secret to the public, though it is presumed that in that time, he obtained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.






Kekkai Genkai:
The trademark of the Uchiha Clan, Takahiro's bloodline allows him to use the Sharingan - also known as the Copy Wheel Eye to some. It is said to allow the user to see chakra flow, have incredible perception, predict attacks and copy almost any technique (s)he witnesses. Takahiro has awakened an evolved Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan; one which has enhanced all his abilities even more, allowing him to easily recognize even complex genjutsu.


Takahiro is also is part of a special bloodline that has allowed him to be born with an arcane kekkei-tota release once used by only by a single legendary Uchiha that is said to be the unholy manifestation of darkness itself. It draws power from primordial darkness that has existed within this world since the beginning of time, and has been concentrated into a form brimming with powers beyond this realm. It has been dubbed the Kurayami Release, and is the true concentrated form of darkness.

Other Info(Anything about your character that you deem noteworthy.):
He's handsome, of course.
He may or may not be a double agent working for the Shinobi Republic after defecting there. Or was he working for Konohagakure again? Is he even a double agent?
He's a Uchiha, but he doesn't really behave like one. He's more calm, collected, charismatic, and funny.
His favorite food is miso ramen.
He has a lot of likes, and not many dislikes. Or was it the other way 'round?
His loyalty to his friends are boundless. Well, maybe not that boundless, but you get the gist of it. He's loyal to his friends.
He's rich. Maybe due to the fact that he's a noble and has went on a lot of S-Rank and A-Rank missions.
He doesn't fret under crazy situations.
He's way more mature than his age makes people think he is.
He's friendly. Really friendly.
He can get quite arrogant at times, especially when facing enemies holding similar powers to his.

Hey look another Uchiha.

Teleport said
I hope you're still accepting character applications.Appearance:Name: Takahiro UchihaAge: 17Gender: MaleVillage: KonohagakureVillage Rank(Genin, Chunin, Etc.): JouninNinja Rank(S-Rank being the highest and deadliest.): S RankNormal Release: Yin-Yang, Fire, WindKekkei Genkai/Tota Release: Kurayami(custom dark kekkei tota), Blaze(basically evolved version of fire)Tools(Optional):Biography:Takahiro was born into the Uchiha Clan as a noble; his ancestors were famed aristocrats in the clan itself. His parents were skilled users of the Sharingan - both had already awakened the Mangekyo before he was born. At an early age, Takahiro found that he was exceptionally talented at doing just about anything; his ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu prowess were far above his age. This led his parents to often boast about him to others; his parents being not the most humble, also called him the genius that came only once in a century. Other parents tried to boast back; that their children were also quite talented. But whenever Takahiro took part in competitions against those children, he always won with a perfect score - whilst not even trying. The other children felt inadequate compared to him, and Takahiro always offered to help them.Takahiro graduated from the Academy at the age of five. During the time when he was a genin, his skills were sharpened immensely; almost to the point where he could be considered an actual threat to inexperienced jounin. His genin group was captured while on one mission by jounin sent from Shinobi Republic, and the jounin-sensei of his group was tortured for potential information, though he would not yield. During this time, Takahiro awakened his Sharingan(which immediately had three tomoe) to face this difficult circumstance, and proceeded to use his newfound abilities to their fullest, killing the jounins with the help of his team and proceeded to flee alongside his teammates. However, backup for the Shinobi Republic jounin had already arrived, and proceeded to kill one of his teammates and his jounin-sensei, leading Takahiro to awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan and kill the attackers. However, he fell unconscious from fatigue soon after reaching Konoha.Takahiro mastered his Sharingan at the age of six, and proceeded to enlist in the chunin exams. He easily progressed through the exam without much difficulty, and when it came to the final part of the chunin exams, he decided to reveal a kekkei-tota he had been training. His opponent was a Hyuga Clan member, who had awakened the Byakugan and could be considered a genius as well. As the Hyuga member prepared to activate the 'Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms' technique, Takahiro summoned a dark katana into his hand as a dark aura started to emanate from him, the crowd holding their breath in anticipation for what was going to happen next. The Hyuga tried to attack him, but Takahiro instantly vanished and appeared behind him, sheathing his katana back into its sheath. Deep diagonal lacerations were found on the Hyuga's chest that ruptured every weak point in his ribs and chest, causing immense blood loss and were inches away from what would have been a sliced heart.Takahiro became a chunin after that fight(at the age of 7), and engaged on medium-high ranked missions quite frequently. He strove to control the destructive power he withheld, and spent the next five years honing his skills in all areas of shinobi training. By the end of the five years, he had almost mastered the abilities of his Mangekyo Sharingan, and had obtained a great proficiency with his Kekkei Tota, to the point where he would be considered one of the best jounins in Konohagakure. He was promoted to the rank of a jounin subsequently.The rest of what he was doing after that is kept secret to the public, though it is presumed that in that time, he obtained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.Kekkai Genkai:The trademark of the Uchiha Clan, Takahiro's bloodline allows him to use the Sharingan - also known as the Copy Wheel Eye to some. It is said to allow the user to see chakra flow, have incredible perception, predict attacks and copy almost any technique (s)he witnesses. Takahiro has awakened an evolved Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan; one which has enhanced all his abilities even more, allowing him to easily recognize even complex genjutsu.Takahiro is also is part of a special bloodline that has allowed him to be born with an arcane kekkei-tota release once used by only by a single legendary Uchiha that is said to be the unholy manifestation of darkness itself. It draws power from primordial darkness that has existed within this world since the beginning of time, and has been concentrated into a form brimming with powers beyond this realm. It has been dubbed the Kurayami Release, and is the true concentrated form of darkness.Other Info(Anything about your character that you deem noteworthy.):He's handsome, of course.He may or may not be a double agent working for the Shinobi Republic after defecting there. Or was he working for Konohagakure again? Is he even a double agent?He's a Uchiha, but he doesn't really behave like one. He's more calm, collected, charismatic, and funny.His favorite food is miso ramen.He has a lot of likes, and not many dislikes. Or was it the other way 'round?His loyalty to his friends are boundless. Well, maybe not that boundless, but you get the gist of it. He's loyal to his friends.He's rich. Maybe due to the fact that he's a noble and has went on a lot of S-Rank and A-Rank missions.He doesn't fret under crazy situations.He's way more mature than his age makes people think he is.He's friendly. Really friendly.He can get quite arrogant at times, especially when facing enemies holding similar powers to his.

To me having him use the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan seems rather OP, he's not a Kage and that would mean he would have access to insanely powerful techniques like Amateratsu without any side effects. It's Shadow's decision but I think you should wait and have him develop the Mangekyo sharingan later in the rp.

@Yog Sothoth

Teleport said However, due to the immense amount of chakra it consumes and the strain it puts on the user's eyes, it is advised to not use it a lot during battle due to its side effects.

HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.

lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

Teleport said
HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

How is she overpowered? She's just good for her age. Like real good.

Edit: c'mon you can't graduate at the age of five.

re edit

Insomnia said How is she overpowered? She's just good for her age. Like real good.

So you think becoming a kage at the age of 16 is not overpowered? That's quite an interesting statement. Because as far as I know, the abilities Kages hold far exceed those of the jounin. Meaning that your character is way over the jounin level. And she's younger than my character. That doesn't seem overpowered at all to you? Not even a bit? :P

Insomnia said Edit: c'mon you can't graduate at the age of five.

Kakashi graduated at the age of six. My character simply enrolled one year earlier lol.

Hey look another S-rank Uchiha and guess what their from Konoha shock.... :O

Teleport said
HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

Hmm slightly bleeding eyes oh the pain.... Gaara was a 16 year old kage but he wasn't OP just like the one in this RP, she's good but not overly powerful. Your explanation of you acquiring Mangekyou shows someone else killed your sensei, however mangekyou only activates from guilt thinking it was your fault or from actually killing them, there is no way your character would believe that was his fault but instead you listed he did as a convenient way to become OP... You don't list any siblings so I assume that you had to receive your mangekyou transfer from one of your parents or otherwise you wouldn't have EMS

"Some have called it the unholy combination of black lightning and Amaterasu's flames, as its speed is comparable to lightning and its power to Amaterasu's flames." this is from your first technique.... wow just wow as fast as black lightning and as strong as amaterasu flames so basically no one can dodge it unless they can move instantaneously.

"This technique achieves the effect of negating and reflecting every genjutsu, fuinjutsu and juinjutsu" No comment.

Then it seems like you weren't happy with OP techniques and you decided to take it to a new level by upgrading Amaterasu and Tsukiyomi, was that really necessary?

"Eye contact is necessary for this technique. However, he merely needs to look at the enemy's eyes for this; it does not matter if they are wearing special goggles or not. As long as he can look at the enemy's eyes, this technique will work. This technique turns the target into dark stone by using this ocular seal jutsu;" Can you explain why your character can cast fuinjutsu with his eyes.

"Takahiro teleports to their blind spot" So now he can move instantaneously as well as sword technique that gets stronger if the oponent is stronger just so you can justify a one hit kill althought it shouldn't be that strong.

" but as the teleport happens instantaneously the opponent will not have time to react" So it is un-counterable and a one shot kill.. wait my bad did i say uncounterable

"Take note that the only way to stop or avoid this technique is to make sure he has no time to activate this, as Archenemy has been labeled a kinjutsu due to its unrivaled destructive power. Dodging this technique is not an option, as the teleport is instantaneous" that's right it gets better the only way to stop is to make sure he doesn't use an instanteous technique

That's not even covering your normal jutsu, look man I don't really care if your character is OP I know you are trying to fulfill a fantasy of having an insanely strong character we all want to but don't shit in front of my face and tell me it's chocolate.. Get what I'm saying? Don't piss over me and tell me it's rain. If your character is OP just admit it don't try cover it up or try justify it. However I myself don't see the point you won't have much chance to dominate and/or kill someone in a fight, maybe if this turns to war you can but if Corrupt allows your character all of this then all of the Kage's are gonna vamp up their power or atleast I am to the point were you look like a mere genin but would that be fun?

All in all it seems to me like you were trying to create a perfect character, maybe a perfect version of what you wish you were. Take away the jutsu and the kekkei genkai you see that this was an attempt to create a perfect being and all but I'm not expert let's see what corrupt says

Teleport said
So you think becoming a kage at the age of 16 is not overpowered? That's quite an interesting statement. Because as far as I know, the abilities Kages hold far exceed those of the jounin. Meaning that your character is way over the jounin level. And she's younger than my character. That doesn't seem overpowered at all to you? Not even a bit? :PKakashi graduated at the age of six. My character simply enrolled one year earlier lol.

Nope. Sure it seems unfair but it simply means that my character is stronger than yours and she achieved this level at an earlier age than your character. Doesn't make her overpowered.

I would've made her older but she's a potential romance interest so nup.

And yeah if Corrupt accepts this I'm giving Yume invulnerability and instant healing. THEN you may call her OP.

[EDITED FOR ADDING DETAILS]
forgot to answer something

Origin said "Some have called it the unholy combination of black lightning and Amaterasu's flames, as its speed is comparable to lightning and its power to Amaterasu's flames." this is from your first technique.... wow just wow as fast as black lightning and as strong as amaterasu flames so basically no one can dodge it unless they can move instantaneously.

Lightning can be dodged, if you haven't noticed, in the universe of naruto. It can be blocked as well. I did not say it had the quickness of which Amaterasu was executed; I simply said its speed was COMPARABLE to lightning, and that its power to Amaterasu's flames. They do not need to move instantaneously. End of story.

Origin said "This technique achieves the effect of negating and reflecting every genjutsu, fuinjutsu and juinjutsu" No comment.

An immense amount of chakra would be needed and strain would be placed everywhere across the body - similar to what Sasuke felt when he used his Susanoo over a longer period than he should've. I was hoping to save the weaknesses for when in the actual story, but I guess I'll have to explain them to you. If your character knows the ins and outs of your own genjutsu/fuinjutsu/juinjutsu, wouldn't you know the exact counters to it? That would make it easy to escape from them, would it not?

Origin said Then it seems like you weren't happy with OP techniques and you decided to take it to a new level by upgrading Amaterasu and Tsukiyomi, was that really necessary?

I don't believe you've read the even nastier side effects of the upgraded techniques. If Tsukyomi puts immense strain on the eyes, don't you think the upgraded version would put an even bigger strain?

Origin said "Eye contact is necessary for this technique. However, he merely needs to look at the enemy's eyes for this; it does not matter if they are wearing special goggles or not. As long as he can look at the enemy's eyes, this technique will work. This technique turns the target into dark stone by using this ocular seal jutsu;" Can you explain why your character can cast fuinjutsu with his eyes.

I'll explain it in full detail, since you've inquired so kindly.
This technique works similar to genjutsu, in the fact that it manipulates a certain part of the opponent's body to activate it. However, this specifically writes a seal in their chakra pathway system in their brain, through an imbalance in chakra. Then, the seal is created and activated, paralyzing the enemy until an unsealing jutsu is used.

Origin said "Takahiro teleports to their blind spot" So now he can move instantaneously as well as sword technique that gets stronger if the opponent is stronger just so you can justify a one hit kill although it shouldn't be that strong.

I believe I have already mentioned the teleport earlier. His kekkei tota is specifically meant to punish his opponents for being stronger - but unless he uses a jutsu that does a lot of damage, it will not one hit kill nor justify it - though it can become stronger as the enemy is stronger.

Origin said " but as the teleport happens instantaneously the opponent will not have time to react" So it is un-counterable and a one shot kill.. wait my bad did i say uncounterable

It's not a one-shot kill. This only works on one person at a time. If another person were to be there and even interrupt it a slight bit, the whole technique would fail, Takahiro would be left defenseless and his chakra levels would be depleted as the move would virtually stop. You're basically asking me to tell you all his weaknesses.

Origin said "Take note that the only way to stop or avoid this technique is to make sure he has no time to activate this, as Archenemy has been labeled a kinjutsu due to its unrivaled destructive power. Dodging this technique is not an option, as the teleport is instantaneous" that's right it gets better the only way to stop is to make sure he doesn't use an instanteous technique

If you really haven't read, it takes time for the runes to form and circle around him. I'll give you the details; the runes take approximately 7.8 seconds to write themselves in the air around Takahiro for the teleport-kick to work.

Origin said That's not even covering your normal jutsu, look man I don't really care if your character is OP I know you are trying to fulfill a fantasy of having an insanely strong character we all want to but don't shit in front of my face and tell me it's chocolate.. Get what I'm saying? Don't piss over me and tell me it's rain. If your character is OP just admit it don't try cover it up or try justify it. However I myself don't see the point you won't have much chance to dominate and/or kill someone in a fight, maybe if this turns to war you can but if Corrupt allows your character all of this then all of the Kage's are gonna vamp up their power or atleast I am to the point were you look like a mere genin but would that be fun?

Chill. Derogatory language is not cool. I don't think my character is OP, because of the reasons I have already stated. You have just skimmed through my character and came up with some hypothesis that it was the most overpowered thing in creation, when you don't even notice the other overpowered things around you. That's what bias is.

Origin said All in all it seems to me like you were trying to create a perfect character, maybe a perfect version of what you wish to be taking away the jutsu and all but I'm not expert let's see what corrupt says

Of course my character isn't perfect. Every character has flaws, though I was going to wait until the story to show how truly flawed my character was, especially mentally. You, however, have forced me to explain the flaws of his jutsu, which I was going to hope to only reveal in the story.