[quote=Freeshooter92]
Wait, what about me? what's wrong with mine? I just fixed that omitted magic training bit (I was on the Xbox, I couldn't just copy the CS so I had to do it from memory. I knew I was forgetting something)Is it the armor? Because I had a Fortite set from the very start last game. Bio? I don't see anything off there...Appearance? Don't know how you'd have a problem there, unless I made something completely ridiculous.Magic? I had the jumpy wind spell and the lightning spell from the start last game too. I kinda need 'em both...I am perfectly willing to change anything problematic, just give the word.
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It’s the Fortite set that I’m unease about and though I’m not against you having a suit of armor, I rather not such a high grade. I can deal with Crugheye or Steel since those are in lesser strength when in comparison. Yes, I understand there's others above it but it's still higher up then steel at least. Another thing is: that was ACT 3. this is ACT 1. You don’t need to worry about enemies, mainly cause I make their levels, and so will Rtron and Lucius (Unless they want me to whip their arses), fit to the character’s own level. It also means if Alaira has Fortite armor then she’s ineligible for any GM Gifts I might bestow on her. It's not fair to have both armor and a special item on top of it so if you're still intend on keeping the armor as Fortite, then at least lower it from full armor to a breast plate and leg coverings. 

[quote=Lucius Cypher]
Character name: Annabeth Gulch[/quote]

She's got my vote. 
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[Quote]
 Haklo then inherited the responsibility of Rift, the Desol Honorblade. It was a broken longsword made of blackened godstone. It had broken generations ago and the broken point was never found. Within the blade was the demonic spirit of Muardu The Aether Serpent, a demon who devoured magical energies. The blade was capable of cutting through magical barriers and deflect magical projectiles as well, absorb magic of fallen foes and transfer it to Haklo. However, with the blade broken, the demon is capable of taking magical energies as well and use it to attempt escape. To keep the demon in line, Haklo suffers excruciating amount of pain of both physical and mental. 

As Haklo got older, his training got a bit tougher. Once he was training with one of the underling guards and it ended with Haklo stabbing him through the neck without remorse.[/quote]

I think Lucius is right here… namely how did he come to the College or he heading there now? 
As for the sword, I rather there be a limit of how many times he can use the ability. We can later on increase it through another means but some of the story elements might require magical barriers which if I read this right, would put Halko at an advantage when attempting to get into an area I otherwise wouldn’t want him in. :p So, let’s say about 3 times per IC mission and we’ll pm/OOC you if I don’t want him to bypass the barrier. Sound reasonable?

[Quote]He might get too ruthless towards anyone he sees as a detriment to his goals.[/Quote]

Ruthless how and what way? Does he outright just attack or makes note for future disposal? Do accidents…happen as lessons to those that get in his way? This more my own curiosity and helps me determine if I should make a pet out of him or not.