Okey-dokey, there's a lot to say.

On the topic of your character Chiba, I want to let you know that immaterialization is in, my opinion, a power which can be very easily applied to make story dull and your character very powerful. I will let you have it on the terms that you put some limit to the power on the topic of rematerializing within organic matter. While being able to rematerialize your hand within somebody else's chest is really cool, it's pretty freaking easy. If you really want to do something like that, I would allow temporary minor possession. Temporary meaning it has a time limit that varies depending on the victims inner strength and minor meaning you can't make the victim do something their basic instincts will not allow, such as inflicting harm on themselves and while possessing someone you can't move completely fluidly, nor speak fluidly either. 

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Dead pixel you are accepted

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Phil you are missing a skill section. Also you need a gear/equipment/weapons section for everything not included by your enhancements. You have various minor grammar mistakes which are a quick fix. I don't really like how I feel about your character being so close to mine in abilities, enhancements and apparent skillsets, but I don't believe I really have the right to ask you to change it unless you want to. I personally would like you to change your character, even just a little bit so they aren't so similar, which is rude and presumptuous of me, I know. If you don't want to, I'd understand as it's your work that you wrote, and I'll back off and won't bother you about it anymore.