nazgul while much better than your original CS, it is still not up to standard for High-Casual. Please try to put all your information in the correct areas, delete any notes I put in the CS skeleton and correct your grammatical errors. Read the OP for more info and try to make your Bio 2 paragraphs minimum as that is the minimum for each post you put up in this RP, your Bio is namely supposed to give me a good grasp at your level of writing so it should be fairly well-written so I know I don't have to worry about you falling below the writing limit.

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Zero, Take your time. The creative process is never one-track

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Mmm...Gargoyle...I won't reject Knight Man(!), since he seems like a gag character but actually has a complicated and deep mental issue. There are some questionable plot holes in your bio, namely him running around Chicago with a sword often and getting away with it. I live in Chicago and the cops here, especially the ones around the south side, aren't really too forgiving, from my experiences, I don't think they'd be silent about a fanatic who carries a sword around the streets. Aside from that, I'd like to let you know there will be a dark twist in the genre as soon as our characters leave Paradise and go to their city, so make sure your character can fit well into a darker story.

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Also, forget any cheeky fun with joint men and women dorms, cuz' I don't really know what the admins think is bad specifically and I don't want to risk it, so, the ladies will have their own room that has its own bathroom.