Nah it's alright I think you got the point across and it was interesting to see the differences. Adulthood is fraught perils and misunderstandings...and more perils, so long as some good is found before or after is what's important. Hmmm...this is a really good opportunity and thanks to your post I got some good foreshadowing in too....It'd be shame to let this go to waste what with Alari and Kaori in there....still it's a bit too soon for it so I'll wait. Don't be surprised if a request comes to the twins in the future though.