[quote=deadlyfairy13][/quote] There are few problems with your profiles - I'm hoping they aren't too difficult to change. ;u; o1 . Mitsukuni does require a biography - I need to know you can grasp his character enough to keep him in-character. o2 . Kioku's mother's family's business would probably leave Kioku as a commoner, perhaps class C or D if she's very lucky. o3 . Kioku's biography needs to be revised - it should be at least a proper paragraph, not a listing of traits and unrelated sentences. Since Touhoure and myself haven't finished our own profiles - we're working on them right now - Vicier's biography for Sienna is a nice reference. [quote=Vicier][/quote] Although I wasn't intending for there to be any foreign students, Sienna impresses me - you worked her in well. C: My only issue is her placement in class A. I actually just added a few notes on the classes to clarify placement there. Family business wouldn't be restricted to her parents - if it's only her parents, then she's more likely to be in class C. If her parents (or family) manage multiple exhibits and/or museums, then she'd fit well in class B. ( students in class A tend to have many generations of building their reputation and wealth )