[quote=AssassinNumber7]
All right, here it is. Is it outdated???
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Yes. Obviously, you need to put up preferred class and training, even if it's just 'none'. And the Bio needs to be extended(two paragraphs, 5-7 sentences each). Also, what are the needles used for? Are they Naruto style needles or sewing needles?

[quote=Toxic Diamond]Character name: Aruna Mortista, Lady Mortista[/quote]

First, how is she coming to the College? Did a friend recommend it as a place of safety? Did she hear about it through hearsay? Second, Adept with most weapons and lack of any real training with most weapons are contradictory. She can't be adept with most weapons and have little training with them too.

[quote=WitchChild]
 Character name: Lord Haklo Thalen Desol
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What does absorb it and transfer it to Haklo mean? Haklo can use their magic? When he stabbed the guard in the neck, did he do that because that was what was required for the fight to stop, because he wanted to, or because it was an accident? Why is he coming to the College? Because his father forced him? Because he wanted to be better with his mageblood? Because he wants to fix the blade?

[quote=Sundered Echo]
Character name: Xyden.
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More rapi-Naga. Lovely. Looks good to me.

[quote=Konan375]Character name: Leith Calder
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What happened to the two men? Did they just leave him when they saw him collapse unconscious? Did the herbalist beat them off with a stick? 

[quote=Lucius Cypher]
Character name: Annabeth Gulch
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Now, she looks good. But, I can't accept her until you swear allegiance to me, and swear to never lift a finger to harm me, and never let any attack or plot against me go unpunished.