Some great ICs thus far! I do have a minor critique for RPG Maker, if I may. I think your ICs will have better flow if you start a new paragraph when dialogue is started by a different character. For example, [quote]"T-thank you" the girl thanked Bobby."It's not safe when you're alone,you should come with me" Bobby said as he lends his hand to the girl"O-ok" the girl replied then girl took his hand and stands."By the way, Mari Newman" Mari introduced herself."I'm Bobby Jones" Bobby introduced himself as well.[/quote] Would become, [quote]"T-thank you" the girl thanked Bobby. "It's not safe when you're alone,you should come with me" Bobby said as he lends his hand to the girl "O-ok" the girl replied then girl took his hand and stands."By the way, Mari Newman" Mari introduced herself. "I'm Bobby Jones" Bobby introduced himself as well.[/quote] This can kind of eliminate any confusion in who is saying what and give a good flow to your narrative. Bobby Jones is pretty kick-ass, really looking forward to more! :D