[quote=BlackBishop]
Some great ICs thus far! I do have a minor critique for RPG Maker, if I may. I think your ICs will have better flow if you start a new paragraph when dialogue is started by a different character. For example,Would become,This can kind of eliminate any confusion in who is saying what and give a good flow to your narrative. Bobby Jones is pretty kick-ass, really looking forward to more! :D
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ok i'll edit my post