[quote=Geoffrey Silt] [/quote] Just a few things about your Character sheet that you may want to look over before I make a call: 1. Your story line is completely off. As I stated in the introduction to this OOC page, the war has not yet begun (see quote below) [quote=Vicier] The story begins, like she says, at the beginning. Before anything happens to the country. The young group of teenagers planning and then going on a camping trip to finish off the summer. [/quote] 2. Your description of your character as well as your biography do not flow; I would suggest you rewrite them so that it works better with the story line; which can also be found in the first post on this page. Or adding a picture of your character instead; instructions on how to do so are listed below in the Code Cheatsheet. 3. And please, I do not intend to come across as mean in anyway, but if the style of what I have just read is any indication of your roleplaying style then I would like to let you know now that this roleplay may not be for you unfortunately.