A couple quick things I want to note I saw in the sheet on my phone. The bunkers are ruled autocratically, they would only have a very limited constitution. As well, no bunker was lost after the formulation of the council. There have been significant losses of life, but Detroit would not have been lost canonically.

Everything else is looking alright t a quick glance. Just remember: Very limited constitution that doesn't impede government operations, Bunker Detroit would not have been lost.