If you have Dervs' approval, then by all means, go ahead. Dervs and I work on pretty much the same level on most things and on some nights it is said that if you stand in just the right place on the Washington-Canadian border, you can hear two voices maniacally cackling about plot twists and story elements. That being said, I also wouldn't advise letting you posting the sheet hang by a thread on me reading it. It'll be a bit before I can do that.