Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by WilsonTurner
Raw
Avatar of WilsonTurner

WilsonTurner AKA / OfWindAndRain

Member Seen 7 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by WilsonTurner>

Aha! The ancient burial ground was just something I threw in to fill out the fluff. It's not the reason for the undead rising, but yes of course they will be rising from there as well as the cemetery. The reason for the undead rising may or may not be linked to pestilence spreading but I haven't decided yet.

So in answer to that Jumping to conclusions can make you look silly! Also the undead remember aren't the biggest threat but something to start us off other than "Let's band together strangers and hunt beasts together".

@GingerBoi123 Looking forward to it.


It doesn't make me look silly. The point still stands. It doesn't really add to the 'fluff.' Read a successful, well-written book- they don't throw in random stuff just to fluff it out. If something's mentioned, it usually matters in some way. An ancient burial ground is not just 'fluff.'

I'm still skeptic.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

@WilsonTurner Look, at the end of the day if you don't like it, leave? It's a location in a fantasy world mostly irrelevant to the story, so what? Nowadays everything is a cliche and everything is ripped from something else. There's only 12 original types of story. It's just a thing.

If the fact that there is an ancient burial grounds as a minor, unimportant detail irritates you so much, then don't partake. It is just fluff, the burial ground will most likely never be mentioned again so why get up in arms about it? The ancient burial grounds is just fluff, it's not an important location, the characters aren't going to visit it and the fact that it's an ancient burial grounds have nothing to do with the rising of the dead other than a means to have more of the fuckers around aha!

Finally, I've read enough fantasy and looked into enough world building to be of the opinion that, a hell of a lot of it is actually just fluff.

EDIT: You've not finished off the CS properly, barely participate and have seemingly little to no interest yet you're giving me shit? Come on, man.

@MarsAdept @GingerBoi123 @Zorogami; I was hoping for this RP to move along a lot quicker than it is. Trust me when I say I understand as much as any one else about real life taking precedent (regardless of whether or not we want it to) and everything else (I'm terrible for taking hiatus'), but if you're making time for other RPs and not this one please let me know so I can recruit again. Otherwise looking forward to reading your posts.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Zorogami
Raw
Avatar of Zorogami

Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

Member Seen 15 hrs ago

@SmileyJawsIf posting is too slow for you, im sorry. That being sad, in a group of only 5 people the story wont be as quick as if you had a bigger group, where you dont necesseraly need to wait for someone else to post before you yourself can post again. If you are not happy with how things are going, then maybe you should try and recruit again, with an emphasis on how many posts per week you expect from everyone.

Also, i don't have a problem with the cemetery plot per se, i just wonder how my character is supposed to be involved? I mean, what if he is a heavy sleeper and doesn't realize there some sort of commotion happening? Stupid example, but maybe you get my point?

Don't take any of this personally, just wanted to put it out there.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by WilsonTurner
Raw
Avatar of WilsonTurner

WilsonTurner AKA / OfWindAndRain

Member Seen 7 yrs ago

@SmileyJaws
Yeah, books have fluff but there isn't unnecessary, useless information. If the author took the time to write it out, it's very most likely relevant.

And everything isn't unoriginal and cliche. Granted, someone else may have already put your idea or plot to use before you ever thought it. That doesn't make it cliche. A cliche is, by definition, a very overused phrase or plot device. A cliche phrase can enhance or ruin your writing, but a plot cliche is not very good at all, unless the roleplay is to specifically be cliche.

And please don't give me shit about my CS. It's not my fault it was accepted and then the CS requirements changed.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by GingerBoi123
Raw
Avatar of GingerBoi123

GingerBoi123

Member Seen 3 mos ago

sorry my post is a little shit
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

@WilsonTurner Look, I'll take that as your resignation and we'll say no more about it. Take from it what you will.

As for the CS you were told it would be change and you were told NOT to post it until it had been changed, so that's your error mate. Goodbye!

@Zorogami For the sake of moving the story along, perhaps your character is awake as it is later? It's more so that people take the time to post elsewhere and not here than the fact it's slow but come on in two weeks? This is exceptionally slow.

@GingerBoi123 Give yourself more credit! :)
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Zorogami
Raw
Avatar of Zorogami

Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

Member Seen 15 hrs ago

@SmileyJawsPoint taken, I'm sorry i haven't been the quickest poster lately, I'll make an effort to keep the pace up
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

@Zorogami I don't mean to sound like an arse, it's just I shouldn't have to keep reminding people to post aha! So now we're just waiting on @MarsAdept to post. :)
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Zorogami
Raw
Avatar of Zorogami

Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

Member Seen 15 hrs ago

@SmileyJawsYou didn't, don't worry about it, especially since you are right. If you want things to move along quicker, we don't have to wait until every single one has a post up...you can move the plot along, people can integrate more than one thing in their post after all

That's my 2 cents on the matter
1x Like Like
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by MarsAdept
Raw
Avatar of MarsAdept

MarsAdept Mars' Star Pupil

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

I apologize for my absence. I am still alive if such rumors began to spread in my absence. I have had a hell of a week. I can barely tell what day of the week it is much less if i am awake or dreaming. I should have a post up within the hour.
1x Like Like
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

Hey guys, sorry real life took over for a couple days aha! I'll post something either later or tomorrow, working on an idea for something else before I lose it (I know, take a page out of my own book and make a post)... If it is tomorrow instead of later I get a post up then sorry but, I'm sure you'll understand. :)
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

Gah! I've been so busy! I'll have something up tonight or tomorrow latest, that's a promise this time.
1x Like Like
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

Sorry guys, real life has had me bogged down last couple days. Who is still interested? @zorogami @gingerboi123 @marsadept
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Zorogami
Raw
Avatar of Zorogami

Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

Member Seen 15 hrs ago

@SmileyJawsSure, im still here
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by MarsAdept
Raw
Avatar of MarsAdept

MarsAdept Mars' Star Pupil

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

@SmileyJaws I am still around.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Zorogami
Raw
Avatar of Zorogami

Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

Member Seen 15 hrs ago

@SmileyJawsI'm sorry real life is keeping you busy, but at the same time I hope you can somewhat appreciate the irony of all this :P Nothing personal!
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

@zorogami aha! Yeah it's pretty ironic alright. Sorry lads and lassies it's just work has been hectic since I finished exams and when I have downtime I just smoke one and get some rest, but I will be posting soon.
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

Posted! Sorry it took so long.
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Whimsley
Raw
Avatar of Whimsley

Whimsley Duke of Whims

Member Seen 8 yrs ago

Let me know if I missed anything!


Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by SmileyJaws
Raw
GM
Avatar of SmileyJaws

SmileyJaws

Member Seen 5 mos ago

@Whimsley I'll talk to you about CS later.

@MarsAdept@Gingerboi123 Is that you guys gone?

↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet