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Viola: "En Guarde, Flappy Ears!"


Sagant: "Very well then, greenhorn!"

Dark and Shadow magic have tentacles. And you know what tentacles mean in an anime world?

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Dark and Shadow magic have tentacles. And you know what tentacles mean in an anime world?


I've seen enough hentai to know where that's going.

@KoL how old is Viola? Just asking so I have an idea how long she and Reed would have known each other from the orphanage
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@KoL how old is Viola? Just asking so I have an idea how long she and Reed would have known each other from the orphanage


Getting ahead of yourself, ? Jk, Jk.

Anyway, she's around sixteen, give or take a year.

EDIT: He probably would at most know her as a small child, given the age gap, or even not at all, if he left the orphanage early.
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Okay, Is this any better? Because I am not going to give up on trying to apply to this RP I really like the idealism of it and I don't want to put in all of this work and just not make it in
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I'm back.
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@TheWindel

Accepted.

@The1Rolling1Boy

You're ok as well. Just remember to write like that on IC as well, please.
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@KoL I will trust me. I'll start posting in IC right as I get on a computer
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@The1Rolling1Boy

It would probably be best to format your IC posts into multiple paragraphs instead of one wall of text.
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@TheWindel You're right but I don't how to do that nd I'm still getting used to this type of format... but i'll edit my post and try to do that
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@TheWindel You're right but I don't how to do that nd I'm still getting used to this type of format... but i'll edit my post and try to do that


Wouldn't the "enter" key work?
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Wouldn't the "enter" key work?


Lol not what I meant by that... I mean where to probably section it off into paragraphs
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@The1Rolling1Boy

By the way, you are aware that you are not following the story like the others, right? If you don't join the group later your character might as well be left without anything to do.



Also, for everyone, I'll be posting today, or tomorrow. I was waiting for some more replies before doing a new post.
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I'll post tonight. Maybe. Probably.
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@KoL Yes I am. I'm just in space currently, I'll have my character join soon I just want to read everyone's else first before I have by character join... I may have to drop but I'm not sure, I just have a lot on my plate currently
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@KoL

Generic intro post is short and generic.
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I just noticed something... I'm the only one with a villain like character... Hmmmmm Well then... I guess it's going to be me and thief/"assassin"
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Okay I'll try and post today is should think
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I just noticed something... I'm the only one with a villain like character... Hmmmmm Well then... I guess it's going to be me and thief/"assassin"


Just don't expect to have much to do, if your character doesn't find a way to get in the story, or the others find a way to do so for you.

By the way, your writing still needs a lot of improvements. The verbs are all out of tense, the punctuation is not done so well/the text could be more spaced and, most of all your choice of symbols to indicate things is kinda against the usual writing manners as well.

You either indicate thoughts/whisper by writing it in italic, like this part here, not by putting them between brackets, {like this one}. I mean, English is not my first language, so I don't set a bar too high for the grammatical level of my RPs, but there's somethings that just won't do.
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Just don't expect to have much to do, if your character doesn't find a way to get in the story, or the others find a way to do so for you.

By the way, your writing still needs a lot of improvements. The verbs are all out of tense, the punctuation is not done so well/the text could be more spaced and, most of all your choice of symbols to indicate things is kinda against the usual writing manners as well.

You either indicate thoughts/whisper by writing it in italic, like this part here, not by putting them between brackets, {like this one}. I mean, English is not my first language, so I don't set a bar too high for the grammatical level of my RPs, but there's somethings that just won't do.


Yeah... I am horrible when it comes to punctuation. I am learning quite a bit about how to roleplay properly through this thing, because what I'm used to is more of a really laid back and freeform rps like in kik group chats. Please bare with me and I am trying to figure out a way for my character to join the story line
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Time to tentacle.
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