[OOC] Fate/numerus clausus (A Great Holy Grail War RP in Scotland!)

[Turboshitter]

@KawaiiKyoukoYesssssss... I recall doing a genderbent Genghis once. Twas fun.

[Cojemo]

I feel Khan is almost too obvious, like so much I don't want to make a sheet for him, unless I do some twist on him. Not just genderbending obviously.

[KawaiiKyouko]

@Turboshitter

Ghenghis Khan, aka Temäidchen, will be born with great tits, great maid costume and great a great thirst for conquest, blood, women and kumis.

Obvious isn't a bad thing tho.

[Cu Chulainn]

@Cojemo

One good twist I've seen done on Khan was that he was made in a similar existence to Altera, whereas in his case, he was engineered by the Divine Spirits in order to subjugate humanity. Had a crazy futuristic-looking whip and everything

[vancexentan]

@KawaiiKyouko

Edit: Sorry was thinking of Atilla Genghis actually hasn't appeared.

[Turboshitter]

@Cojemo

One good twist I've seen done on Khan was that he was made in a similar existence to Altera, whereas in his case, he was engineered by the Divine Spirits in order to subjugate humanity. Had a crazy futuristic-looking whip and everything

@Cu Chulainn

[vancexentan]

@GreyI'm not sure who's going with who but yes I have no intentions of dropping Saber, or Leon. I don't like pairing up with other people for roleplays like this.

[Cojemo]

So I just felt like putting this up for now as I like working on the site. It's a WIP very early in development, but you can see what I'm getting at.

Name: Beatrix Cosette
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height/Weight: 5'7'', 131 lbs
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Master of:

Personality: Beatrix was born privileged with some of the best magic circuits on the planet, her potential as a magus enormous. Don't know that? Well don't worry, because she will make sure to let you know time and time again how much better she is than everyone around her. Indeed, she is quite confident in her abilities and holds herself with an aura that is hard to ignore, though this can sometimes lead to arrogance. It is not uncommon for her to look down upon others and ridicule them for the simplest mistake, but if she were to commit the same error you can bet there will be some excuse as to why it wasn't her fault. Beatrix can be rude, abrasive, and overall an unpleasant person to get along with, but if there's one positive trait to her it's her honor. Challenge her to a fight? If she sees you worthy enough she'll happily play along. Help her out in some way, even if it isn't necessary? She may be crossed with it, but she'll make sure to pay you back. Don't get the wrong idea though; she'll cut anyone down who stands in her way, her ultimate goal being to see herself at the top of the food chain where she belongs.
Background: (see the above)

Origin: Overload
Element: Earth
School of Magecraft: (typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Magic… ; feel free to use that as a reference or come up with your own)

List of Skills/Spells: (please list every spell of note that your character knows as well as its cost in units of magical energy)

Mystic Codes: (typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Mystic_Code ; Mystic Codes are fundamentally different from normal spells and don't/shouldn't require any significant expenditure of magical energy, however keep in mind that students aren't likely to have many if any)

Circuit Quality: (on a scale of E to A, with E being a garbage-tier magus like Shirou and A being a top class magus like Rin)
Circuit Quantity: (see above)
Number of circuits: (this will directly relate to circuit quantity; you can either have a lump-sum of circuits like Shirou if you like to keep things simple or a smaller number of circuits each with their own studs, like Rin or Professor Ayondale)
Od (units): (this will be the major difference between this and other Fate RPs; that is, we will be keeping track of your total prana expenditure for both spells and maintaining your Servant as expressed in units of Od [keep in mind that a spell's Od cost is only to start the spell, Mana from The World keeps it going])
Maximum circuit capacity: (the above measurement of your total units of Od is how much magical energy your body produces a day, whereas this is how many units of magical energy your circuits can handle when channeling Mana from the atmosphere; usually it will not be more than a few times your total Od)

Other: (anything else you want to make note of)

As a helpful frame of reference for determining your costs in units of Od: typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Magical_Energy

[Cu Chulainn]

Really tempted to do a Hitler-with-Longinus Lancer but holding back.

[Cojemo]

Really tempted to do a Hitler-with-Longinus Lancer but holding back.

@Cu Chulainn

Mentioning that, how strong would Hitler actually be? Like, more modern Servants are weaker due to magic fading in strength over time. Would he mostly be a gag Servant? :P

[Turboshitter]

@Cojemo Oh, she looks like she'll be fun.

@KawaiiKyouko Another unique attempt might be to rely on history for designing Genghis. Historically, Genghis Khan united most of the Mongol tribes under his rule using diplomacy and the promise of a better life through his sick social and economic policies. Many historians believe all the raiding and conquering Khan did after the fact was just a hilariously destructive attempt at team-building exercises. He acted like a bloodthirsty warmonger to keep the bloodthirsty, warmongering tribes underneath him working together instead of turning against him or each other.

Following this interpretation, Khan could be an excellent middle-manager or responsible, level-headed Team Mom xD

[Cu Chulainn]

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Mentioning that, how strong would Hitler actually be? Like, more modern Servants are weaker due to magic fading in strength over time. Would he mostly be a gag Servant? :P

@Cojemo

If we're getting into Nasuverse lore, there are actually very strong modern Servants around due to their actual feats they accomplished in life. Archer Nikola Tesla has an EX Noble Phantasm, for example, due to "bringing about the second coming of the Age of Gods." This, added with the part where Hitler was said to have in his possession the Holy Lance of Longinus (which in Fate lore, was equal to Ol' Rhongo,) Hitler would probably be a formidable side-boss sort of Servant, at the most.

[Turboshitter]

Really tempted to do a Hitler-with-Longinus Lancer but holding back.

@Cu Chulainn

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Mentioning that, how strong would Hitler actually be? Like, more modern Servants are weaker due to magic fading in strength over time. Would he mostly be a gag Servant? :P

@Cojemo

He'd probably be a gag Servant if anything, yeah. He probably wouldn't even qualify as a Heroic Spirit, tbh. Though it would be nice to see more dudes in our roster. Counting Genghis, half our Servants are already ladydudes, and the Black Faction's team has about the same ratio xD

[Turboshitter]

If we're getting into Nasuverse lore, there are actually very strong modern Servants around due to their actual feats they accomplished in life. Archer Nikola Tesla has an EX Noble Phantasm, for example, due to "bringing about the second coming of the Age of Gods." This, added with the part where Hitler was said to have in his possession the Holy Lance of Longinus (which in Fate lore, was equal to Ol' Rhongo,) Hitler would probably be a formidable side-boss sort of Servant, at the most.

@Cu Chulainn

>Fate/Grand Order
>lore

[Cu Chulainn]

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>Fate/Grand Order
>lore

@Turboshitter

While I do agree that Grand Order broke a lot of canon rules, among other bad things, the point still stands that there are legends that say Hitler had in his possession the Lance of Longinus, which is a pretty big deal. This factor would probably be, if anything else, his claim to being summoned.

Of course, only an irregular or corrupted Holy Grail War would be able to summon someone like Hitler in the first place, and even then, he'd probably be a Fourth or Third-Class Servant. Definitely won't stand a chance against actual Heroic Spirits, but still a formidable threat in his own right, especially with the Lance of Longinus in his hands. The way I'd see it, get rid of the lance, and Hitler is just about dead.

[Grey]

Really tempted to do a Hitler-with-Longinus Lancer but holding back.

@Cu Chulainn

Longinus with the Black Barrel when

gunlance/10

[Turboshitter]

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While I do agree that Grand Order broke a lot of canon rules, among other bad things, the point still stands that there are legends that say Hitler had in his possession the Lance of Longinus, which is a pretty big deal. This factor would probably be, if anything else, his claim to being summoned.

Of course, only an irregular or corrupted Holy Grail War would be able to summon someone like Hitler in the first place, and even then, he'd probably be a Fourth or Third-Class Servant. Definitely won't stand a chance against actual Heroic Spirits, but still a formidable threat in his own right, especially with the Lance of Longinus in his hands. The way I'd see it, get rid of the lance, and Hitler is just about dead.

@Cu Chulainn

Oh I'm not denying the legends or the connection between Hitler and Longinus. I'm just saying that Grand Order is not a good reference point for Fate lore, or the lore of the Nasuverse in general xD

[Shadow Daedalus]

Caster - Daedalus

I've out-smarted kings and conquered the sky, but I still couldn't save my daughter. I will not fail again.

Class: Caster
True Name: Daedalus
Master: Undecided
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Height/Weight: 183cm/82 kg

Stats:
STR: E
END: E
AGL: D (B)
MAG: A
LCK: C

Class Skills:
Territory Creation: B, Allows creation of a 'workshop'

Personal Skills:
Divinity: D (Sealed)
Natural Born Genius: B
Innovation: EX

Noble Phantasm(s):
Name: Khaos Labyrinthos
Title: The Twisting Stone Prison
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: EX
Range: 1 Mile
Maximum Number of Targets: All
Description: Recreating one of his most infamous works of architecture, He and all other Masters and Servants around him are trapped in a sprawling, treacherous Labyrinth, rigged with traps and complex mazes that are immune to most forms of damage. Lasts until either his enemies or Daedalus himself is defeated, although it can also be dispelled manually. A 'Workshop' must be built using Territory Creation, and Daedalus himself must channel substantial amounts of Mana, at least 2000 points, meaning he must borrow Mana from an external source. Only attacks of B rank or higher can damage the Labyrinth once it is formed.

Name: Alítheia Fterá
Title: True Miracle of Flight
Type: Support
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Maximum Number of Targets: 1 (self)
Description: Blessed by the Goddess of Wisdom Athena, Daedalus can spread a pair of organic, magically enhanced wings to fly freely through the air with a low Mana cost, which also grants his Agility a passive boost to rank B even whilst not in flight. Depending on how much Mana he is feeding into the wing, he can fly at almost supersonic speeds and can block attacks up to rank B Noble Phantasms. Unseals his Divinity Skill for the duration of the Noble Phantasm. Costs 100 Units of Mana for every 30 minutes it is active.

Name: Axios Architékton
Title: Olympian Construct
Type: Support
Rank: A+
Range: 15m
Maximum Number of Targets: N/A
Description: A skilled inventor and accomplished architect, this Noble Phantasm replaces his Item Creation Skill and gives Daedalus the ability to create and freely control magi-mechanical constructs, each equal to low-ranked (C/D) Noble Phantasms of their own. These constructs can take any form he can envision, including modern weapons and even mechanical creatures. The Noble Phantasm consumes 1500 Units of Mana, which it can distribute amongst multiple constructs.

List of Constructs

[D Rank - 300 units]
Small to Mid-sized Creatures like Birds or Wolves
Simple/Lower Powered weapons like Swords and small firearms
[C Rank - 500 Units]
Mid to Large Creatures like Bulls and Wyverns
Complex or High powered weapons like Large firearms or Conceptual weapons
Talos - Utility Form (designed for practical use, not combat. 168cm tall)
[B Rank - 700 Units]
Large Weapons like Cannons or imitations Noble Phantasms of the same rank
[A+ Rank - 1200]
Talos - Armoured Form (Designed for defence and open combat, between 3m and 12m tall depending on requirement)

Here you go @Turboshitter, One (finally) completed CS. I've added in what I was asked to, and increased his Mana by a rank. I've been pretty backed up with work, but that should clear up pretty soon.

[vancexentan]

I sincerely believe Khaos Labyrinthos shouldn't be a thing. Combined with our assassin means either the opponents dies. Or we die. The second he activates it someone needs to be taken out of the picture.

[Grey]

I've out-smarted kings and conquered the sky, but I still couldn't save my daughter. I will not fail again.

@Shadow Daedalus

I sincerely believe Khaos Labyrinthos shouldn't be a thing. Combined with our assassin means either the opponents dies. Or we die. The second he activates it someone needs to be taken out of the picture.

@vancexentan

I'd argue that changes to Assassin would be more appropriate than nixing Khaos Labyrinth. The Labyrinth is intrinsically, statically tied to Daedalus. It's quantifiable in the sense that "we know it exists, approximately what it should do and why it deserves to be there". "A crystallization of lifestyle" and a psuedo-Reality Marble on the other hand are generally more malleable to change on account of being customized.

But Locusta's already accepted* and the Labyrinth needs preptime for deployment so

_{*Speaking of which, this has been bothering me for a bit, but why does she not just have Poison Resistance as a skill if her NP feels the need to point out her universal immunity?}