Drakel said
This thread was good... But now it's in your home TP... It's bad now.
everyone automatically assumes i'm the sewers. i'm toilet paper. i just clean up the shit and get rid of it. let someone else take care of it after that
everyone automatically assumes i'm the sewers. i'm toilet paper. i just clean up the shit and get rid of it. let someone else take care of it after that
TP said
everyone automatically assumes i'm the sewers. i'm toilet paper. i just clean up the shit and get rid of it. let someone else take care of it after that
I throw you in the sewers as well tho...
Drakel said
I throw you in the sewers as well tho...
i break apart and die most of the time before i reach there. just tiny little pieces of paper that pretty much don't exist anymore.
TP said
i break apart and die most of the time before i reach there. just tiny little pieces of paper that pretty much don't exist anymore.
They will never find your body...
Drakel said
They will never find your body...
not until they take hold of me in their bathrooms so i can fulfill my glorious purpose.
Your signature is my natural response here...
Drakel said
Your signature is my natural response here...
TP said
exactly... It's a pity that using phones to post fucking sucks so bad....
Drakel said
exactly... It's a pity that using phones to post fucking sucks so bad....
i feel ur pain brah
Someone kill everyone who posted in here and start over.
including me.
including me.
Doivid said
Someone kill everyone who posted in here and start over.including me.
thread is kill
Turtlicious
Banned
Seen
7 yrs ago
Queen Raidne said Oh Drakel, whose pride
comes from fapping to cars, Our
mind - please get outside!
Hey, uh not to nitpick, but while you DID get the general idea of the haiku (5-7-5) each statement needs to be in itself inclusive. As in, you should be able to take out any piece and still have a statement of some sort.
IE: Oh Drakel, whose pride - Is not inclusive, but!
Oh Drakel, full of pride
stemming from car fetishism
please get out of spam
As you can see, in the new haiku each piece can be broken and make sense, but when added together, increases the complexity. Hopefully, you'll write better haiku's in the future.
Enjoy~
is not a complete
© 2007-2024