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Of course you're welcome to join.
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Oh. Lugia said that "basically I was in" and I assumed it meant I could post but be ready to fix any problems. My bad.

My point was that you didn't need to wait to post, since I can only check the apps by tomorrow.

Um. Hi! This is an odd concept I've never tried. Was wondering if I could still apply! I know it says always accepting, but I figured it would be polite to inquire first. ^_^;

No probs, just drop in (with an app of course).
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Simple and sweet!
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Glad to see you guys made this succeed.
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Before I even go and get lugia or kabling to look at the app. I do not think we do take shiny. sure for diffence but shiny I am really unsure about it.

Second of all, you say she can learn these moves, but looking at them, they are egg moves or tm. Its a bit too... many egg moves and tm there.

I will let kabling and lugia look at it, but I am giving you the pointers about it.

Edit: Some things that could be changed: Protect replaced by a eevee move for level <15, same for heal bell.

Il read bio later when i get at school and that I wait for class
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o.o

Okay. So I'll have to drop heal bell and protect? And the shiny aspect? Is it definitely a no-go? o.o

I just figured a healer or cleric would be nifty to have. ^_^;
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Like I said, shiny I am unsure, but you can make her still unique. If you look at my app on the caracter sheet, she is a eevee (nos sylveon) also, but her fur was paller.

Protect could be removed for now, cause its a tm that you can get and use.
heal bell il let the others decide.

I am still unsure about it too much. Also if you look back they might ask you to post the app in the caracter aection, just saying.

Off for now, will be back later.
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Okay. I'll leave the shiny aspect for now.

But I'll drop Protect for...er...Refresh. I think? Let me double check.

-Meanders to Bulbapedia.-

Okay. Swift will have to work, I guess. @.@
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Another point: Bio seems rather short.... mind adding in more parts to the bio, like what she might have done to survive, any interesting things that happened in her life.

Sorry its just I know how Lugia and Kablings looks at apps, jsut trying to help.
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You probably should also post it in the 'Characters' section, too.
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Two Eevees.

Alright. :V
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Eh.... will see what she evolves into.

I am sylveon here so...ya
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Simple and sweet!


Yes, unfortunately, that bio is quite short, and the shininess is a bit of a put-off for me, personally. I'm kinda on the fence about Hyper Voice and Wish, but the other two moves are just fine.

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So if I extend the bio a bit and make it more in depth, would that be more acceptable? I can get REALLY in depth if you want.
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Eh.... will see what she evolves into.

I am sylveon here so...ya


I'm going for Umbreon myself. ^_^

Sorry about the double post!
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Extend Bio, remove some moves and replace them. I think just Wish if you want to go healer type could maybe work.

For moves... I could sudgest this:

Helping Hand
Swift
Wish
And another move...
Maybe one of these:
Echoed Voice, Shadowball, Hidden Power

This way you would have moves that could be better, or add a uniqueness and look for a different typing move, like I did with my other caracter (Who can use a steel type move)

Also, instead of going for shiny, you could make it that she looks like she has whitish fur, but still have brown around some main parts like the legs and such.

Just some sudgestions.

Edit: Oh and... wish is kinda... chain breeding usually. So that is kinda something already big. Kinda why Lugia is on the fence with that one, as well as Hyper voice being a move that is tutored.
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Okay. I'll get in depth on the CS shortly. ^_^
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Okay. Changes made? Good to go?
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Generally I'm not going for very strong moves until later on ( Tailwind just sets up Drifloon's already high speed ). Supposedly Levita would learn her signature Ominous Wind next, alone with Stockpile + Spit Up / Swallow.
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Hm... should we have things like predators in this RP? Seems a little odd, given that they're fairly civilized...
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