yea, if you didn't notice, this is most definitely based on Log horizon.
here is some advice:
Add an actual plot, maybe its the USA server or something, considering in the game, it is a 1/2 scale model of the world.
Also, if your going to base it off of Log Horizon, you should atleast use the game/world (Elder Tale)
I also suggest adding more to the char sheet, as it needs stuff like personality, gender, Race/species, and abilities.
Each class has their own upsides and downsides, and you should list them more prominently, like the idea that mages have low health but heavy magic damage.
As well, LH is based on more of building a civilization out of the chaos they are given, instead of SAO's nearly everyone is on the same page, so lets survive mentality.
You cant do a good RP based on both, so either have more or less of an action based RP.
add this bit of stuff, and it might be a bit better. also ,if your going to use LH as inspiration, state that the RP is inspired by it somewhere, instead of leaving us to speculate.
here is some advice:
Add an actual plot, maybe its the USA server or something, considering in the game, it is a 1/2 scale model of the world.
Also, if your going to base it off of Log Horizon, you should atleast use the game/world (Elder Tale)
I also suggest adding more to the char sheet, as it needs stuff like personality, gender, Race/species, and abilities.
Each class has their own upsides and downsides, and you should list them more prominently, like the idea that mages have low health but heavy magic damage.
As well, LH is based on more of building a civilization out of the chaos they are given, instead of SAO's nearly everyone is on the same page, so lets survive mentality.
You cant do a good RP based on both, so either have more or less of an action based RP.
add this bit of stuff, and it might be a bit better. also ,if your going to use LH as inspiration, state that the RP is inspired by it somewhere, instead of leaving us to speculate.
