Can you guys give me some feedback about my posts with the Carver and the Ripper? While I think they're pretty cool and unique as characters, they're also incredibly difficult to write as. I like to think that I've gotten adept at writing fight scenes, but I find this particular case to be a struggle. It's odd for me to imagine how a fight might go between two such unconventional characters, especially given the circumstances.
What usually ends up happening is I do part of a post before drawing a blank or just feeling bored, and so I end up doing it in a few different sections over the next day or two (I'm in the middle of this process as I write). And once I'm done, forget about proofreading, because by the end of all that my mind is fried and I'm tired of looking at those few paragraphs.
Well, that turned into more of a rant than I intended. But anyways, is the stuff going on in the Source interesting, or just plain repetitive/confusing?