[OOC] Athalia Academy

[Animelover_princess]

NarayanK said
Mattily VS Baelily.I am still waiting to see some tearful romance-festival to begin. More feels = more addiction = more roleplay.Profit for everyone.

Ohhhhhhhhh
interesting
can't wait for that to arise ;)

[Kenshi Brett]

Sorry about that. (stupid phone) A druid is a celtic priest. He has power over things considered holy by. The ancient celts. Like fire and iron Thats the reason the steel knife did not fly into his hand(handle first, the blde would hurt) Also if you did look properly you would notice I mispelt lit in the part "light a fag." I tryed to change it but my stupid phone bugged out and would let me scrowl down to edit it.

It is a pain. I will probally Edit it so its more presentable on a text editor.

[FaithsRose]

Theobromine said
Need to go somewhere real quick. I'll be right back with Kathy's post in a bit.

Okey dokes, bye for now ^^

Edit:

NarayanK said
Mattily VS Baelily.I am still waiting to see some tearful romance-festival to begin. More feels = more addiction = more roleplay.Profit for everyone.

Do we get to pick a favorite in the OOC? :P (Just for fun, not to change/decide anything!)

[HylianRose]

@Kenshi Brett

Very nice! I must ask, is this your first time RPing or just new to the site?

Anyway, I'll get on to giving feedback...

~Powers~

His powers are a bit... strange.
1) I don't think we're accepting anymore 'healing' characters. We already have quite a few with that ability, my own included.
2) I'd be interested in hearing details about this 'Luck' power and how it would be applied in the RP. We've already denied a character with a power very similar to this.
3) Welsh. Now, words spoken in another language in an English RP are interesting. I have a format I'd like you to use just so it's easier for everyone to understand.

"[Insert Non-English Language Here]" [Insert English Tranlastion Here]

Make sure you use the italics tags to signify that it is the translation.

Being able to calm animals is an interesting ability. I like it!

We'll adjust weaknesses once we iron out powers. It's important to have a well balanced character. ;)

Everything else is fine though, if you want to be a better writer over all, I'd try to get more variety in your sentence structure. How can you make the sentences flow more easily with little of those awkward pauses? You don't always have to start each sentence with 'He...' It sounds very awkward after a while.

Make some changes and then try again. ^-^

[Ebil Bunny]

FaithsRose said
Do we get to pick a favorite in the OOC? :P (Just for fun, not to change/decide anything!)

Go for it! :D

[Kenshi Brett]

Its frustrating trying to do it with my phone. But kay.

[Aeris]

I will be able to post in two hours or so, peeps!

[Animelover_princess]

the calming animals thing might be interesting since Andromeda has much the same power over snakes (and is partially a snake)

[HylianRose]

I'm not going to voice my opinion as it might affect how characters deal with my own. So I'll just keep my opinion of the fight for Lily to myself. Lol.

Maybe the song should really be the Girl Who Murdered Love. Lulz.

[HylianRose]

Kenshi Brett said
Its frustrating trying to do it with my phone. But kay.

Sorry! I sent you a PM about the matter. ^-^'

[Ebil Bunny]

HylianRose said
I'm not going to voice my opinion as it might affect how characters deal with my own.

How so?

[Aeris]

HylianRose said
I'm not going to voice my opinion as it might affect how characters deal with my own. So I'll just keep my opinion of the fight for Lily to myself. Lol.Maybe the song should really be the Girl Who Murdered Love. Lulz.

What a twist!

[NaraK]

FaithsRose said
Okey dokes, bye for now ^^Edit: Do we get to pick a favorite in the OOC? :P (Just for fun, not to change/decide anything!)

You will pick a favorite, and I will personally go ahead and kill the loser hoard you voters up and host a "VS" team sequence. Of course, it's all for the lolz.

All for the lolz, indeed...

<3

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HylianRose said
@Kenshi BrettVery nice! I must ask, is this your first time RPing or just new to the site?Anyway, I'll get on to giving feedback...~Powers~His powers are a bit... strange. 1) I don't think we're accepting anymore 'healing' characters. We already have quite a few with that ability, my own included.2) I'd be interested in hearing details about this 'Luck' power and how it would be applied in the RP. We've already denied a character with a power very similar to this.3) Welsh. Now, words spoken in another language in an English RP are interesting. I have a format I'd like you to use just so it's easier for everyone to understand. "[Insert Non-English Language Here]" Make sure you use the italics tags to signify that it is the translation. Being able to calm animals is an interesting ability. I like it!We'll adjust weaknesses once we iron out powers. It's important to have a well balanced character. ;)Everything else is fine though, if you want to be a better writer over all, I'd try to get more variety in your sentence structure. How can you make the sentences flow more easily with little of those awkward pauses? You don't always have to start each sentence with 'He...' It sounds very awkward after a while.Make some changes and then try again. ^-^

I would like to also add in a positive bit of feedback. The vampire bit is... interesting. Here's hoping that someone would make a vampire character.

-cough- -cough-Hylrose -cough- - cough- -cough-

[FaithsRose]

HylianRose said
I'm not going to voice my opinion as it might affect how characters deal with my own. So I'll just keep my opinion of the fight for Lily to myself. Lol.

Maybe the song should really be the Girl Who Murdered Love. Lulz.

Wise decision xD N'aww poor Lily...yet lucky Lily at the same time :P

NarayanK said
You will pick a favorite, and I will personally hoard you voters up and host a "VS" team sequence. Of course, it's all for the lolz.All for the lolz, indeed...<3

I already have :O I daren't say yet though, my mind could be changed xD 'VS' team sequence? lol

[Kenshi Brett]

Should I repost or edit the existing character sheet post?

[Ebil Bunny]

Personally, I think Bael and Matt are evenly matched.

[Animelover_princess]

i won't voice my opinion quite yet, either ;)

[NaraK]

Kenshi Brett said
Should I repost or edit the existing character sheet post?

Edit it. Do not worry, we will check the CS sheet again. ;D

[Animelover_princess]

i'm heading off guys!
be back later

[HylianRose]

@Ebil

Because I don't want my voice changing the way the characters act toward my character. If I say I'm pulling for one, the other might back off and that ruins the fun. ^-^