ok, busy time:
@Blue:
basically he is much better now, just 1 small question I am curious about and one suggestion
-The Question: what do you mean with Semi-small amount?
-The Suggestion: as this is not an game, with the ice sword, would it not be better that the sword would slightly freeze on touch?
as in, one hit might give a small scale freeze burn, the target can still move but has pain, more hits on different places would slow the target down and multiple hits on or near the same spot would truly freeze more and more
Gives the sword a more real time effect that pure chance that we cant calculate
anyway, aside the suggestion (that is yours to decide) and the question, he is accepted.
For BlackCat and Jason hero.
we have a small issue, ironically both have the same issue but in different context:
-Human world and Eatherra world wall
Both you have a direct connection to both worlds while originally they are not supposed to be connected (aside the light that pulled the humans into Eatherra)
Black, yours was cursed by a Mage, yet in the real human world, there are no real mages and curses that have ever been proven, so to have the curse while living in the human world is not possible.
What you can do is that your char, due to the light event, got dropped away from the others for some reason and then met a witch or something and got cursed that way
Jason, yours is have demon, and I have said that halve is fine, but Demons live in Eatherra as a known race, yet humans dont.
With the wall between the 2 worlds, it should be impossible that the mother is human, she cant have been pulled from the human realm and the demon king cant have jumped to the human world either.
I said this before I think, About what race would one of the parents be, it can be any sentient race (aside humans (might have forgotten to add that)
Sorry for being stingy, but otherwise it will break the plot setting that was made
