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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Jazzy
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Agent,

Henry was camouflaged, she would've had a hard time seeing him im broad daylight, let alone in total darkness. She would have no idea what attacked Jaska. To her it would look like Jaska got tackled by nothing but air, the sound being her only clue of what it was, and she hasnt met Henry yet, so she wouldn't know it was him.

Just putting it out there.
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To build off that, I want to mention this isn't the first time it has happened.

The random obtaining of information without reasonable in-character cause is meta-gaming, and sometimes it is unintentional. But I've noticed, at the very least, four instances where you had a run-in with it. Just make sure to be very careful about it and think about what you know as the writer, and what the character knows as a character. Separate your knowledge. Think about where your character is, what they see, what they are capable of discerning, the situation they are in, and I promise it'll happen less often and it will make the overall story more interesting.
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Codi has the ability to chase people, but she would prefer to just wait for them to come to her. She's naturally made for defense.

I might also bring in a character that broke some rule that would warrant a day in the detention center, in order to explain why she was absent. I had the idea for a strategic character that has nothing powerful in regards to attacking, or even really defense, but strategically, it would be unwise to underestimate the power. The idea is a character that would basically be like a living ghost, she would have no heat signature or scent, and she would also be completely silent unless she wanted to make noise. The explanation is that she actually has the power to walk between dimensions, although rules of travel would still apply. You could take it a step further, and say that if she actively thought about it, she could become completely invisible, and become intangible, able to walk through walls and immune to physical touch, the down-side being she can't do anything while invisible. I also intend to make it where this character is ill-tempered, because this character will be like Henry in the sense that power manifestation replaced puberty, and therefore, she looks like a little girl when she's actually much older, and hates people messing up and treating her like a little child.

I was going to bring it up to get an opinion from Allen before I made a sheet that might get rejected.
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That power sounds pretty cool. I'd say yus so far.
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Yay! Alright, then, I'll make the character, and we'll just say she got into an argument where she threatened someone, which is why she's in the detention center. We could have it where she came from an area closer to Atticus and Codi's (Not the same town, though) so they could kind of tie her in by suddenly remembering a little transparent girl in an argument, since she might have been near them at the arrival.
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Semi-random question: Would this character still be able to see when she completely phases out? Logically it would seem like the light from this dimension would just pass right through her without registering to her rods and cones. The same would probably be true with sound too. Unless she can avoid phasing through certain things while still phasing through others.
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666 posts not counting this one.

All hail our lord and savior, satan.

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Gangster!Henry's theme song:
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Will this character be a new student or a returning one?
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I guess that makes me satan...
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That power would need some pretty heavy drawbacks, Vipera
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If she absolutely phases out of our dimension, then the absence of matter would have to be filled in quite abruptly. She'd leave a vaccuum. And if she can phase out in the blink of an eye, there'd probably a minor crack like a whip. And there's the matter of appearing back where solid matter is. Fluid matter, such as gas and liquids, that would probably be okay. Phasing back in when solid matter is in the way would probably result in that structure plus your body being simultaneously destroyed. You can bullshit that there'd be a localized explosion, which would be an interesting last resort move. To go out with a bang

That isn't necessarily a weakness, just some details to the power that might be interesting.
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Another related question: Would this character also be able to fly? If not, they'd either fall through the floor (if still affected by gravity) or be unable to move (if unaffected by gravity). Another concern is how they breath, since they'd be out of phase with the air that was just filling their lungs (unless they could also phase that, but then there would be the problem of getting more).

I'm not trying to shoot anything down here, just presenting potential avenues of limitation for the power.
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She actually subconsciously moves her atoms, so technically she can fly. She also can't breath while phasing and so can only remain phased for as long as she can hold her breath.
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Guys I'm really sorry but I think I have to pull out of this one. I hate to do it, especially since Evan has such potential in the story and I just got here but there are waay too many people and characters and it's giving me anxiety and I just can't handle it. I'm really sorry but I'm going to have to pull out. Just let Evan fade off or something.
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The cluster-fucking will die down once we get out of this act, I promise. The CTF was a bit of a stretch we decided to try out, and given how it is providing some complications, something like that likely won't happen again. If anything, I encourage you to stop for now, wait until the next act, and feel it out from there and see if leaving is something you still want to do.

I'm sorry that it's a little too much for you right now.
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I'm just waiting for someone to enter the damn base. Marks going to feel like an idiot for being so tense if nothing ends up happening XD
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Yeah, now was definitely not a good time to jump in, bro. But it'll be over soon and more relaxed interactions will begin.
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Sorry I didn't get in a post when expected, guys, I have some stuff IRL that I've been involved in that's been taking up more of my time than usual. It will probably be finished in a few days, though, so I can RP more effectively.

As for this new character, guys, it's probably a new student, since it would be more likely for people to mix up regarding her age if they had never seen her before. Additionally, I intend to add balancing out for her powers, but I don't know when I'll get around to making her. I typically don't want too many characters, and the idea for this one's powers is highly abstract, so it may or may not work out, to begin with. I can give you a general idea of the powers, though.

The idea behind her powers being linked to an alternate dimensions involves the concept that some dimensions are more 'removed' from the world than others. She isn't fading into a weird, alien dimension, but a 'shadow' dimension that overlaps our own very closely, almost like some concepts of a spirit or dream realm with slightly alternate laws, and happens to be almost identical. This is how I explain it, with the additional claim that certain actions will generally affect it; while others don't.

Something like light or photons or just energy, which are generated by anything light or electricity-related, do not typically consist of atomic matter, and can penetrate into this dimension, meaning if you have a power involving lasers or any other ridiculous amount of light, you could possibly still affect her; though physical powers, bullets, or anything else physical won't work; it's just like how I would see a ghost if it weren't involved with magic. Physical beings, like humans or animals, will appear as ghosts in this dimension, sort of like transparent phantoms, which is how this character knows where they are; these phantom images, however, do not make noise or any tell-tale signs that would let you know that something was coming, similar to how my character is almost always going to be a bit phantom-ish, so she normally does not produce sound unless she wants to. The reason for the character being able to become intangible is that in this dimension, she kind of happens to be so lacking in density normally that she can pass through things without much difficulty, and her powers allow her to retain her vitals and such without losing order or stability (Although definitely, it would kill her to lose intangibility inside solid matter, it's a guaranteed way to die). This in mind, though, she could accidentally float up into the air if she isn't careful, so she actually has to concentrate on the ability to maintain friction between herself and the ground; it's a conscious effort to do everything in this dimension, even being tethered in it. I will also give her the breath limitations. She's mastered these aspects of her powers by the time she reaches the school.

Powers I want to leave for development is that she could actually figure out on an advanced level, with practice, how to control her floating, not just by how high or low she is based on friction; but how to actually control directions, too, since 'floating' isn't really 'flying' if you can't go anywhere and you're floundering in one spot. Additionally, since breathing is something that usually has limits, I want to say she has greater lung capacity than most people, even for her small size (Since super-limited lung capacity would ruin the benefits of her power pretty badly), enough to actually rival perhaps a professional diver; however, her lungs won't be expanded to this limit, because she's never tried to stretch how long she's been in the dimension. The maximum time she could hold her breath would be based on that of the capability of regular humans, since it's possible for an impressive amount of time; there will be lots of passing out, though, from not enough oxygen, before she ever reaches the potential, she might never reach it, who knows?

Anyway, those are my ideas.
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When you started saying that it would be a shadow dimension, my first thought was "what happens if she walks into a shadow wall?", though if she's intangible to things in that dimension too then that pretty well solves it. I'm guessing that it would be easier for her to create/maintain friction on a "solid" surface than it would be to do it in the air? (hence why she can still "walk" but not fly yet).

Would there be other people/creatures that she could interact with in this shadow dimension? Ones that don't exist in the normal one?
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