thanatosDefiant said
Quick question: is it all right if we write our appearance instead of using a picture?
I don't think he would mind all that much if we used written appearances.
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I don't think he would mind all that much if we used written appearances.
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Name: Rem
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very passionate when speaking of his goals. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
Bomu Bomu no Mi: Rem consumed the Bomu Bomu no Mi, a devil fruit that allows him to blow up any part of his body and remain uninjured, and also gain immunity to any explosions. He can also tell the quality of gun powder.
Party Tricks: During his time at the caravan, Rem had learned a few basic tricks for his performances. He can ride on a unicycle while performing several feats, such as juggling up to ten small balls, crafting balloon objects, and even using the unicycle with solely his hands. He can also balances spinning plates on sticks. Combat-wise these serve no real purpose, but he practices them anyway for his own amusement.
Techniques:
Explosive Grab: Rem grabs onto his enemies with his hand and explodes it.
Explosive Cling: Rem clings onto his opponent's body and blows himself up.
Explosive Kick: He kicks his enemies and explodes his leg at the same time.
Explosive Mini-balloons: He attacks his enemies with several small balloons with small amounts of air in them.
Explosive Flick: He takes dried mucus from his nose and flicks it to his enemies, then making them blow upon contact.
Traits:
Heavy Lifting - Rem is able to effortlessly lift a quarter of a ton and when pushed to his limits, is able to carry object weighing half a ton.
Inventory:
Unfilled balloons
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very passionate when speaking of his goals. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
Techniques:
Traits:
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Very sorry, please ignore the above. It was a duplicate post.
Could have just edited the duplicate post and put that instead of making a third post you know lol.
Going for a youngin' eh? :p
Going for a youngin' eh? :p
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@Duthguy
The DF you get is the Hebi Hebi no Mi, Model: King Cobra.
@Diminuendo
Tell what DF you want to reserve.
@Dawnstar
The first thing I’d like to point out, please use the [Hider] code when make your CS. No one wants to see, at least I don’t, a wall of text filling up space.
Next would be the location of your character. This is party my fault, but I everyone’s gonna be starting at Lougetown. My bad.
Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.
Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something. Anyway, the character sheet is good. Accepted man.
Cleaned it up. As for the bounty. Murder of that degree and since I doubt there'd be enough withnesses, is around 3,000,000 Beli
@Thanatos
You can, but I’d prefer an image.
The DF you get is the Hebi Hebi no Mi, Model: King Cobra.
@Diminuendo
Tell what DF you want to reserve.
@Dawnstar
The first thing I’d like to point out, please use the [Hider] code when make your CS. No one wants to see, at least I don’t, a wall of text filling up space.
Next would be the location of your character. This is party my fault, but I everyone’s gonna be starting at Lougetown. My bad.
Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.
Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something. Anyway, the character sheet is good. Accepted man.
Cleaned it up. As for the bounty. Murder of that degree and since I doubt there'd be enough withnesses, is around 3,000,000 Beli
Name: Vis Conrine
Age: 24
Race: Shandian
Height and Weight: 6'1", 190 lbs
Bounty: 3,000,000 Beli (Murder)
Personality: Vis's ideals focus around the common theme of honor. Without honor there would be no reason for him to live. Vis has never been one to lie or hurt those who are innocent. Vis believes that one must prove themselves before trust can be given. Yet, he does not believe that one must prove that they deserve respect. Vis gives everyone he meets equal amounts of respect until they prove that they shouldn't have the respect or if they deserve more. It is rare for Vis to crack under stress. His temper is a wild beast that has made him more than a few enemies.
History: Not much is known about Vis's past but from what he has told people, he was born in Shandia Village in Skypiea. His life there was simple. His father worked as a cloud cutter while his mother took care of him. When Vis was eight years old, his father enrolled him in a class in swordsmanship. Vis was slow to learn with the katana but he was determined to be the best of his class. By fourteen years old, Vis was capable of beating his father in a battle but he wasn't top of his class. There was always a person who was ahead of him, his brother Kusinga. His brother was the same age as him but was always able to beat him.
Vis eventually switched from fighting with one blade to fighting with two blades. Though his training in Nitoryu was slow, Vis was able to create two techniques before he was eighteen. These two moves were what allowed him to finally beat his brother in a one on one duel. After beating his brother, Vis was given two katanas called Gurikari and Zaminri. The Gurikari was Vis's father's balde while Zaminri was his brother's. Vis left Shandia Village when he turned ninteen. He was looking for something more than cutting clouds, he was looking for adventure. Vis joined a crew of pirates for two years until they murdered a few innocents. When a marine tried to place the crime solely on him, Vis's temper got the better of him and he killed the marine along with a two criminals who were in the area.
Vis has been on the run since that day. He was ashamed of himself and turned towards being a pirate again. He traveled with a band of pirates until they stopped in Water 7 where he decided to break off and form his own crew. The small pirate ship he had was fitting for the small crew he had with him. While in Water 7, Vis heard that the One Piece was up for grabs and posted a notice that he was looking for a few extra people to crew his ship.
Abilities: Nitoryu (Two Swords Style)
Techniques:
Inventory:
Guikari and Zamniri (Katanas)
Age: 24
Race: Shandian
Height and Weight: 6'1", 190 lbs
Bounty: 3,000,000 Beli (Murder)
Personality: Vis's ideals focus around the common theme of honor. Without honor there would be no reason for him to live. Vis has never been one to lie or hurt those who are innocent. Vis believes that one must prove themselves before trust can be given. Yet, he does not believe that one must prove that they deserve respect. Vis gives everyone he meets equal amounts of respect until they prove that they shouldn't have the respect or if they deserve more. It is rare for Vis to crack under stress. His temper is a wild beast that has made him more than a few enemies.
History: Not much is known about Vis's past but from what he has told people, he was born in Shandia Village in Skypiea. His life there was simple. His father worked as a cloud cutter while his mother took care of him. When Vis was eight years old, his father enrolled him in a class in swordsmanship. Vis was slow to learn with the katana but he was determined to be the best of his class. By fourteen years old, Vis was capable of beating his father in a battle but he wasn't top of his class. There was always a person who was ahead of him, his brother Kusinga. His brother was the same age as him but was always able to beat him.
Vis eventually switched from fighting with one blade to fighting with two blades. Though his training in Nitoryu was slow, Vis was able to create two techniques before he was eighteen. These two moves were what allowed him to finally beat his brother in a one on one duel. After beating his brother, Vis was given two katanas called Gurikari and Zaminri. The Gurikari was Vis's father's balde while Zaminri was his brother's. Vis left Shandia Village when he turned ninteen. He was looking for something more than cutting clouds, he was looking for adventure. Vis joined a crew of pirates for two years until they murdered a few innocents. When a marine tried to place the crime solely on him, Vis's temper got the better of him and he killed the marine along with a two criminals who were in the area.
Vis has been on the run since that day. He was ashamed of himself and turned towards being a pirate again. He traveled with a band of pirates until they stopped in Water 7 where he decided to break off and form his own crew. The small pirate ship he had was fitting for the small crew he had with him. While in Water 7, Vis heard that the One Piece was up for grabs and posted a notice that he was looking for a few extra people to crew his ship.
Abilities: Nitoryu (Two Swords Style)
Techniques:
- Mirror Image- This move is a combat techinque that Vis uses. During this form of attack, Vis weaves his baldes(Gurikari and Zaminri) in and out as he strikes at his opponent. The weaving blades look almost as if they were one blade being mirrored across the surface of water or glass. Vis will always lead in with Gurikari, his left hand katana, and follow in with a strike from Zaminri, his right hand katana.
- Twin Strikes- Vis takes the position in which Gurikari and Zaminri are both held vertically. This combat stance is used to strike with both blades at the same time. These strikes are often slower than the strikes in Mirror Image but hit heavier. These slower strikes often leave Vis open for attacks which is why he rarely uses the stance.
- Saikuronkōn(Cyclone Blades)-This battle stance is one in which Vis pivots on his heels with the spines of both his katanas running along his forearms. This technique is known for the fact that it is both defensive and offensive. When Vis uses it for defense, he simply rotates on his heels to form a protective barrier with the blades. The offensive mode, on the other hand, is where Vis not only pivots on his heels but also steps forward in doing so. The cyclone slowly advances towards Vis's opponent until contact his made. Vis has been trying to perfect the Cyclone Blades ability but has yet been able to move at a quick pace or rotate while in the air.
Inventory:
Guikari and Zamniri (Katanas)
@Thanatos
You can, but I’d prefer an image.
Oh jabber, sent you a PM regarding connections.
Wanted you approval before continuing.
Wanted you approval before continuing.
OP
Character sheet is fine. Just need to fix certain parts.
Please elaborate on Party Tricks. Is he good at acrobatics? Can he breath fire? Can he pull a sword out of his mouth?
And Explosive Combat isn't really a technique; techniques are named moves that characters from One Piece usually shout out. (Ex. Gomu Gomu Pistol, Soru, Franky Radical Laser, et cetera)
Please elaborate on Party Tricks. Is he good at acrobatics? Can he breath fire? Can he pull a sword out of his mouth?
And Explosive Combat isn't really a technique; techniques are named moves that characters from One Piece usually shout out. (Ex. Gomu Gomu Pistol, Soru, Franky Radical Laser, et cetera)
Name: Rem
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very jumpy whenever he's in serious,danger. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very jumpy whenever he's in serious,danger. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
- Bomu Bomu no Mi: Rem consumed the Bomu Bomu no Mi, a devil fruit that allows him to blow up any part of his body and remain uninjured, and also gain immunity to any explosions. He can also tell the quality of gun powder.
- Party Tricks: During his time at the caravan, Rem had learned a few basic tricks for his performances.
- Explosive Combat: Rem uses his basic knowledge of combat and combines it with his devil fruit power to use bomb attacks. Once he makes contact with his enemies, he blows up the body part that made contact with them.
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Jabber said
Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something.
I actually like the sound of Cloud Blade Style. It leaves room for more development in his moves. I might have to do a bit more work into developing moves for that though. I will keep the base three techniques I currently seeing as they are basic and I will let the cloud style develop later on. As for the murder, that was the part of my history I was unsure of. I've changed it now so that he committed the murder because he believed his death for a crime he didn't commit would dishonor him.
OP
@Dawnstar
That seems cool. Yeah, just go with that. That way, you'll stay consistent with your personality.
That seems cool. Yeah, just go with that. That way, you'll stay consistent with your personality.
Name: Jannikki (Her last name is unknown)
Age: 19
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5'8" and 155 lbs
[Appearance]
She is a tall girl with short, dark red hair that is styled into a pixie cut. Her eyes are the same color as pine trees and three small golden rings are pierced onto the top of both ears. She is usually seen wearing a brown jacket that is too large and baggy for her (which ultimately makes her breasts look small/barely visible), a pair of ripped up jeans and a pair of broken sandals. Various burn marks are visibly seen on her hands, arms, shoulders, chest, stomach, legs and feet as well as a tattoo of a sabertooth tiger's head, which is right in the center of her back.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Jannikki is very passionate about her dream to become the world's greatest doctor and she will stop at nothing to achieve her goal. Despite her passion, she does not trust others easily and it takes time before she can become friends with someone. She is paranoid about everyone she meets and she usually keeps things to herself, especially about her past and her Devil Fruit.
History:
She was born to a prostitute that was kidnapped/brought onto the ship by force and a captain of a notorious pirate crew called the "Sabertooth Pirates". She spent a large portion of her life living on the ship with her father She was the only girl on board once her mother committed suicide a day after her birth and she was well respected since she was the captain's daughter. She spent a large portion of her time with the ship's doctor, Ruka. Ruka was a fish-man that the Sabertooth pirates captured and was forced to be the ship's doctor, so he is hateful towards his captain and he often talks of eventually rebelling against him. Jannikki would often assist Ruka with his work and she would spend hours reading all of his medical books as well as treating patients herself. Though she knew that Ruka hated her father (though she didn't know why), she felt bad for him because he was disliked by all of their fellow crewmembers and thus took pity on him. That pity ended up becoming a inseparable friendship between the two and their friendship concerns the crew, including her father.
Each member of the Sabertooth Pirates has a large tattoo of a sabertooth somewhere on their body and Jannikki received hers when she was only five years old. Her tattoo gives her a lot of pride about her crew and she swore that she'd give her life for both her crew and for her captain.
Jannikki's life drastically changed when the Sabertooth pirates found a Devil Fruit, the Magu Magu no Mi (also known as the Magma Magma Fruit) during their travels and the captain planned to sell the fruit for a large sum of money, as the fruit had originally belonged to Akainu, a Marine who had taken part at the Battle of Marinefold and killed the Pirate King's brother, Fire Fist Ace. At the time, Jannikki was only ten years old and she had no knowledge of what Devil Fruits were. She mistook the fruit for an ordinary piece of fruit and she accidentally ate it, which gave her the power to control magma at her own will as well as turn her arms into magma. Jannikki was unable to control her newly found power and she accidentally used her powers to cover the Sabertooth ship with magma, which ended up sinking the ship and killing everyone on board, including her father and Ruka.
Jannikki managed to escape the ship before it sank by getting onto a lifeboat and because she couldn't control the magma that she was creating, she gained various third degree burns all over her body as a result. Distraught by the damage she caused, she vowed to never use her Devil Fruit power ever again and would instead study to become a great doctor like Ruka and hopes to become a great pirate like her father.
She spent the next nine years traveling from island to island in order to study and strengthen her medical skills. During her travels, she came across many rookie pirate crews that let her join their crew in exchange for her services as a doctor and she didn't spend much time with any of them, as she didn't trust them and was paranoid that they would end up turning on her. Jannikki does not like her current crew and wishes to leave them, but she chooses to stay with them, as they were sailing to Lougetown to collect supplies. She is now currently visiting Loguetown to buy medical books/supplies and hopefully join another pirate crew that she can trust.
Abilities: Magu Magu no Mi: As a child, Jannikki accidentally ate the Magu Magu no Mi, which allows her to create, control and transform her entire body into magma at will. As demonstrated by Akainu, the Magu Magu no Mi is powerful enough to turn a whole section of an island (aka Punk Hazard) into a blazing inferno. Despite this, Jannikki refuses to use her Devil Fruit abilities due to how they ended up killing her father and crewmates.
Medical skills: Jannikki has been studying to become a doctor for her entire life and she was a former apprentice of the fishman, Ruka. Most of her knowledge comes from books from all over the world, so she is able to identify diseases from all over and knows how to make her own medicine from various plants.
Techniques:
Magma combat: Though she only used her powers when she was a child, she was able to turn her arms into magma that was rock solid and could turn her entire body into magma. She can also shoot magma out of her arms and make it rain magma by shooting magma into the air and letting it fall onto the earth below.
Inventory: Mostly medical books, bandages/gauzes and various plants from around the world.
Age: 19
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5'8" and 155 lbs
[Appearance]
She is a tall girl with short, dark red hair that is styled into a pixie cut. Her eyes are the same color as pine trees and three small golden rings are pierced onto the top of both ears. She is usually seen wearing a brown jacket that is too large and baggy for her (which ultimately makes her breasts look small/barely visible), a pair of ripped up jeans and a pair of broken sandals. Various burn marks are visibly seen on her hands, arms, shoulders, chest, stomach, legs and feet as well as a tattoo of a sabertooth tiger's head, which is right in the center of her back.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Jannikki is very passionate about her dream to become the world's greatest doctor and she will stop at nothing to achieve her goal. Despite her passion, she does not trust others easily and it takes time before she can become friends with someone. She is paranoid about everyone she meets and she usually keeps things to herself, especially about her past and her Devil Fruit.
History:
She was born to a prostitute that was kidnapped/brought onto the ship by force and a captain of a notorious pirate crew called the "Sabertooth Pirates". She spent a large portion of her life living on the ship with her father She was the only girl on board once her mother committed suicide a day after her birth and she was well respected since she was the captain's daughter. She spent a large portion of her time with the ship's doctor, Ruka. Ruka was a fish-man that the Sabertooth pirates captured and was forced to be the ship's doctor, so he is hateful towards his captain and he often talks of eventually rebelling against him. Jannikki would often assist Ruka with his work and she would spend hours reading all of his medical books as well as treating patients herself. Though she knew that Ruka hated her father (though she didn't know why), she felt bad for him because he was disliked by all of their fellow crewmembers and thus took pity on him. That pity ended up becoming a inseparable friendship between the two and their friendship concerns the crew, including her father.
Each member of the Sabertooth Pirates has a large tattoo of a sabertooth somewhere on their body and Jannikki received hers when she was only five years old. Her tattoo gives her a lot of pride about her crew and she swore that she'd give her life for both her crew and for her captain.
Jannikki's life drastically changed when the Sabertooth pirates found a Devil Fruit, the Magu Magu no Mi (also known as the Magma Magma Fruit) during their travels and the captain planned to sell the fruit for a large sum of money, as the fruit had originally belonged to Akainu, a Marine who had taken part at the Battle of Marinefold and killed the Pirate King's brother, Fire Fist Ace. At the time, Jannikki was only ten years old and she had no knowledge of what Devil Fruits were. She mistook the fruit for an ordinary piece of fruit and she accidentally ate it, which gave her the power to control magma at her own will as well as turn her arms into magma. Jannikki was unable to control her newly found power and she accidentally used her powers to cover the Sabertooth ship with magma, which ended up sinking the ship and killing everyone on board, including her father and Ruka.
Jannikki managed to escape the ship before it sank by getting onto a lifeboat and because she couldn't control the magma that she was creating, she gained various third degree burns all over her body as a result. Distraught by the damage she caused, she vowed to never use her Devil Fruit power ever again and would instead study to become a great doctor like Ruka and hopes to become a great pirate like her father.
She spent the next nine years traveling from island to island in order to study and strengthen her medical skills. During her travels, she came across many rookie pirate crews that let her join their crew in exchange for her services as a doctor and she didn't spend much time with any of them, as she didn't trust them and was paranoid that they would end up turning on her. Jannikki does not like her current crew and wishes to leave them, but she chooses to stay with them, as they were sailing to Lougetown to collect supplies. She is now currently visiting Loguetown to buy medical books/supplies and hopefully join another pirate crew that she can trust.
Abilities: Magu Magu no Mi: As a child, Jannikki accidentally ate the Magu Magu no Mi, which allows her to create, control and transform her entire body into magma at will. As demonstrated by Akainu, the Magu Magu no Mi is powerful enough to turn a whole section of an island (aka Punk Hazard) into a blazing inferno. Despite this, Jannikki refuses to use her Devil Fruit abilities due to how they ended up killing her father and crewmates.
Medical skills: Jannikki has been studying to become a doctor for her entire life and she was a former apprentice of the fishman, Ruka. Most of her knowledge comes from books from all over the world, so she is able to identify diseases from all over and knows how to make her own medicine from various plants.
Techniques:
Magma combat: Though she only used her powers when she was a child, she was able to turn her arms into magma that was rock solid and could turn her entire body into magma. She can also shoot magma out of her arms and make it rain magma by shooting magma into the air and letting it fall onto the earth below.
Inventory: Mostly medical books, bandages/gauzes and various plants from around the world.
OP
@Everyone
I know I keep on telling you guys to use the [Hider] option and to make your character sheets more presentable by properly using Bold on some sections of the character sheet, but if that can't be followed, that's fine.
Anyway, I'll be making an Info Cache later on. All character sheets will be put there. I'll be the one who'll manage the character sheets that don't make use of [Hider] and Bold option.
@Daisuke
I dislike it when people choose logias as their primary stat since their semi-invincible unless their opponents have Haki or Seastone, but I like the fact that her mastery of her DF was quite poor.
History is okay.
As for abilities, please mention her current level of mastery of the fruit. And like Explosive Combat (See Thanatos' CS), Magma Combat is not a technique. Its more of a Fighting Style.
Rokushiki is a fighting style while Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai are techniques.
You mentioned that she can turn into magma. That doesn't need a technique, that's already a given. Well, unless she doesn't know how to due to lack of control of her fruit.
You also said that she could shoot magma out of her arms and make it rain magma by shooting magma into the air and letting it fall onto the earth below. That's a technique. Give it a name. Akainu had a similar technique.
I know I keep on telling you guys to use the [Hider] option and to make your character sheets more presentable by properly using Bold on some sections of the character sheet, but if that can't be followed, that's fine.
Anyway, I'll be making an Info Cache later on. All character sheets will be put there. I'll be the one who'll manage the character sheets that don't make use of [Hider] and Bold option.
@Daisuke
I dislike it when people choose logias as their primary stat since their semi-invincible unless their opponents have Haki or Seastone, but I like the fact that her mastery of her DF was quite poor.
History is okay.
As for abilities, please mention her current level of mastery of the fruit. And like Explosive Combat (See Thanatos' CS), Magma Combat is not a technique. Its more of a Fighting Style.
Rokushiki is a fighting style while Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai are techniques.
You mentioned that she can turn into magma. That doesn't need a technique, that's already a given. Well, unless she doesn't know how to due to lack of control of her fruit.
You also said that she could shoot magma out of her arms and make it rain magma by shooting magma into the air and letting it fall onto the earth below. That's a technique. Give it a name. Akainu had a similar technique.
thanatosDefiant
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I-Am-X said
Could have just edited the duplicate post and put that instead of making a third post you know lol.Going for a youngin' eh? :p
Heh heh, to be honest it was more of a triplicate post. I edited the third one to apologize for the second one. I kind of hope a delete button gets added to the site.
Name: Rem
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very passionate when speaking of his goals. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
Bomu Bomu no Mi: Rem consumed the Bomu Bomu no Mi, a devil fruit that allows him to blow up any part of his body and remain uninjured, and also gain immunity to any explosions. He can also tell the quality of gun powder.
Party Tricks: During his time at the caravan, Rem had learned a few basic tricks for his performances. He can ride on a unicycle while performing several feats, such as juggling up to ten small balls, crafting balloon objects, and even using the unicycle with solely his hands. He can also balances spinning plates on sticks. Combat-wise these serve no real purpose, but he practices them anyway for his own amusement.
Techniques:
Explosive Grab: Rem grabs onto his enemies with his hand and explodes it.
Explosive Cling: Rem clings onto his opponent's body and blows himself up.
Explosive Kick: He kicks his enemies and explodes his leg at the same time.
Explosive Mini-balloons: He attacks his enemies with several small balloons with small amounts of air in them.
Explosive Flick: He takes dried mucus from his nose and flicks it to his enemies, then making them blow upon contact.
Traits:
Heavy Lifting - Rem is able to effortlessly lift a quarter of a ton and when pushed to his limits, is able to carry object weighing half a ton.
Inventory:
Unfilled balloons
Age: 17
Race: Human
Height and Weight: 5 foot 4, 132 pounds.
Appearance: Rem is a thin yet muscled man with slightly below average height. He has short, brown hair and similarly brown eyes. He usually has a calm, cheerful look as his neutral expression. He wears a boater hat, and wears a white tank-top which looks like it's way too large for him. He walks around barefoot as he'd probably just end up blowing up any foot wear he got. He has a straight nose, ears with attached earlobes, and somewhat yellow teeth.
Bounty: 0 Beli
Personality: Rem has an adventurous personality, he has yearned for exploration since he was a child. During his childhood, he had nothing but the utmost admiration for pirates, respecting them for being able to do whatever they want whenever they want. He is not the sort of person to do charity work and will often refuse to help anyone out unless he has taken a liking to them. The promise of treasure, however, is a good way to convince him to do just about anything. He loves joking around and has a very casual personality. Although, he is known to get very passionate when speaking of his goals. Rem likes saying whatever comes to mind, which often gets him in trouble. He hates when people make comments about his stature, which is a good way to get him angry quickly. He has a great love of party tricks, and keeps several related items on him. Rem is the type of person who would choose a man's romance over the traditional type, any time. He can be very rash at times and make decisions without thinking about the consequences. Rem is ambitious, determined to do anything to achieve his goals. He has a strong sense of loyalty and will slaughter anyone who messes with his friends, which is another way to get him angry. His general attitude is to never get stuck up on the past, always moving forward instead.
History: From the day he was born, Rem has always loved traveling. He was part of a caravan of traders and entertainers that would do anything for money or rare items. He never got to meet his parents, neither did the other members of the caravan, he was just kind of...left somewhere. All he had with him was a boater hat. Whenever they performed, Rem was always the opening act to get the crowd ready for the rest of the more bizarre performances, hence why he had to learn a few tricks. He wasn't given much in regards to freedom, but he was at least fed enough to live. Then one day, after a performance, he met pirates. Or rather, he was kidnapped by them. They pissed him off after they stole all the money they got from the show, as well as the money the villagers had, but he didn't really care about those guys. After insulting them, they took a liking to him and decided that they'd take him as a cabin boy. Whenever Rem reflects on these events, he feels lucky that they didn't decide to kill him right then and there. He initially refused to do their chores, but after a while (and painful discipline) he came around. Once he traveled with them for a few years, he gained a weird admiration for their mannerisms, he was also much more happy to joke around with them, and they did the same. One day, while exploring an island, the Pirates returned to the ship with something with them. A devil fruit. While they were happy to find it, they suspected that the fruit was a fake, what were the odds they would actually find a fabled devil fruit? So they did what they thought was logical, they'd give it to Rem and see what happened. While they suspected that either one of two things would happen: A) the devil fruit was a fake and something funny would happen; or The fruit would be real and they'd have wasted a perfectly good fruit. This, of course, happened behind the captain's back. While he was always up for a good joke, he wasn't dumb enough to potentially waste a devil fruit for amusement, unlike his crew mates. Rem was given the fruit for "a job well done on his chores" (which was ALREADY out of character for them) and ate it. He'd never forget their faces when he blew up seconds later. Afterwards, he was forced to take a much more active role in the crew by orders of the captain, who nearly slaughtered his crew after hearing what happened, Rem suspected it was so the fruit wouldn't have gone to waste. During this time, Rem was able to learn how to fight, and his strength had increased tremendously. After a few years, Rem decided to leave the crew without a word. While he was legitimately sad to go, he felt as if he needed to start his own crew to even get recognition as a pirate. Coupled with the fact that even though he had been able to grow a lot, he felt as if he wouldn't be able to become truly powerful unless he left on his own. And thus began his journey as a rookie pirate, one who was determined to find one piece and be known worldwide as the new pirate king!
Abilities:
Techniques:
Traits:
Inventory:
OP
Better.
I'm seeing where you're going with this character. Pretty impressive.
I will revolutionize this forum. People will make character sheets that are neat and pretty to look at.
But one step at a time. I need to make this RP a thing first.
Will be starting this RP in a few hours.
I'm seeing where you're going with this character. Pretty impressive.
I will revolutionize this forum. People will make character sheets that are neat and pretty to look at.
But one step at a time. I need to make this RP a thing first.
Will be starting this RP in a few hours.
DAWNSTAR A literal Type 0 Super Luminous Star
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8 yrs ago
*Claps happily* I am glad to see that this is going somewhere. I am eager to put Vis into action.
OP
Oh yeah. To everyone who's joining, talk it out with the other RPers. You guys should establish or at least have an idea on how crews will be made. I won't be giving you guys NPC captains to choose from. I want crew decisions and compositions to be player-dependent.
Jabber said
I know I keep on telling you guys to use the [Hider] option and to make your character sheets more presentable by properly using on some sections of the character sheet, but if that can't be followed, that's fine. Anyway, I'll be making an Info Cache later on. All character sheets will be put there.
Instead of making an Info cache, you can treat the first post of the OOC thread as the info cache, for example.
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/57799/posts/ooc?page=1
Just put all the characters in a spoiler and link their cs via permalink or whatever
Not really sure if this site has an area to post an info cache thread anyway. lol
OP
Compressing all character sheets along with NPCs, considering the coding system here, is going to be quite tedious.
And instead of just doing links, I want a sense of uniformity, so I'll be editing the format of all the character sheets. Well, unless you guys do it.
And instead of just doing links, I want a sense of uniformity, so I'll be editing the format of all the character sheets. Well, unless you guys do it.
DAWNSTAR A literal Type 0 Super Luminous Star
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8 yrs ago
Hmm, crews don't have to be all that big if you have people who happen to have a great deal of skill in battle. The straw hats are small compared to other crews but they are deadly. My current crew I would be looking at would be about ten to fifteen people who aren't that great in battle but will be npcs and then one or two other pcs. Of course, about five or six of the crew men would be working the mast which leaves about three more to work in the cargo deck and a few more to be kitchen workers and so on. I am not saying that the ship couldn't hold more but we have to consider that pcs will be more powerful then your average crewman.
DAWNSTAR A literal Type 0 Super Luminous Star
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8 yrs ago
Jabber said
Compressing all character sheets along with NPCs, considering the coding system here, is going to be quite tedious.And instead of just doing links, I want a sense of uniformity, so I'll be editing the format of all the character sheets. Well, unless you guys do it.
Well, we could always set up a Sheet dump in the Character Sheet section of the forum. We could store all the Character Sheets there while having the OOC act as a info cache. I will probably get to fixing up my sheet later on.
Edit: Due to the fact that the post above decided to double this is a response to what happened before I posted the above.
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