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Henzukaya said
Harine, WOW. Damn, I like your character. Although there isn't a physical description or image of your character, unfortunately. If you provide either, then you're in.


Click on his name, picture should come up.

And thank you for the compliment, I greatly appreciate it. You are too kind.
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another lonewolf, wunderbar... You guys realize in this game you are supposed to play WITH others right? XD That personality type is getting so overused through out RPs it's quite frustrating to see it over and over...
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Forsythe said
another lonewolf, wunderbar... You guys realize in this game you are supposed to play WITH others right? XD That personality type is getting so overused through out RPs it's quite frustrating to see it over and over...


I didn't realize this until after I'd gone through the OOC and read all of the other CS'. I can make edits and alter his personality some, but he won't be playing nice.
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Forsythe said
another lonewolf, wunderbar... You guys realize in this game you are supposed to play WITH others right? XD That personality type is getting so overused through out RPs it's quite frustrating to see it over and over...


I planned on having Francesca evolve through the story. She doesn't like being a lone wolf. It just happens. :(
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I planned on having Francesca evolve through the story. She doesn't like being a lone wolf. It just happens. :(


Likewise. I like development as the plot/RP rolls along.
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Separate note, coffee person, is the bird's wings noticeable even bound up? I got two hours afore my next break so...
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Well, as I've mentioned before, I (perhaps unfortunately) chose to have an introvert as my character. If anyone wants to talk to a mysterious cloaked figure by a window, then by all means.
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Scarifar said
Well, as I've mentioned before, I (perhaps unfortunately) chose to have an introvert as my character. If anyone wants to talk to a mysterious cloaked figure by a window, then by all means.


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Pyromania99 said
Separate note, coffee person, is the bird's wings noticeable even bound up? I got two hours afore my next break so...


srsly use the skype, set-me-on-fire person, i can respond to a popup instantly, here i only check once in a while xD I suppose the wings could be seen under the coat if you are looking carefully, she doesn't exactly make a point in hiding them because due to history she may be quite known throughout at least one kingdom. Still you probaly have to notice her adjusting the harness or know what to look at. At present time her back is against a seat so it's pretty much unnoticeable.
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Edited again.
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Here, take this for the waiting list, please?
Name: Perry Symund
Race: Human
Age: 19
Gender: Male

Appearance: 6’2 and nearly 200lb., though most people wouldn’t guess since his build is fairly lean and thin and his clothes are generally full-body.

Personality: A well-balanced individual, Perry doesn’t feel troubled whether he’s by himself or in the company of others. Level-headed in most situations, he’s attentive and responsive to both the needs of others and situations around him. Though he’s largely independent, Perry isn’t a loner at heart and enjoys helping others if possible. As such, he’s someone who’ll face challenges head on with others at his back rather than playing a supporting role. Though he has no problems with other people, he does enjoy his personal freedom and ability to do as he pleases. While mature enough to not be a rebel, he can become a bit frayed if he’s not allowed to express himself. Also, despite being a people person, Perry is actually a fairly closed individual. He has many acquaintances, but few close friends.

Weapon: Blast Bicell is Perry’s custom Flail-Lance. In it’s storage form, it clips onto a hostler at the back of his waist. Fully extended, the weapon is about seven and a half feet in length. The massive lancehead can be fired outwards with a detonation of Dust, turning it into a projectile. Connected to the handle by a length (25m) of wire, its flight path can somewhat be guided. Once it comes to a stop though, Perry can still utilize the weapon for broad sweeping attacks that devastate Grimm in a wide area around him as the heavy lancehead is used in a fashion similar to a flail, but one with an absurdly long chain. As one would expect, the launch feature is also quite devastating if used on an enemy at close ranges.

Semblance: No Escape. A curse-like Semblance, it can be applied by any extension of Perry’s body; namely his weapon in most cases. Upon realizing on an opponent, a small mark appears, but begins to rapidly fade away, disappearing within a minute at most. Additional uses of his Semblance don't stack, but each application does reset the duration. While in place, the mark prevents Perry and his opponent(s) from moving away from one another, with a minimum threshold of five meters. Once the distance is closed to this, they cannot move further from one another; essentially forcing the two of them into a small arena. It can be horrible disorienting for opponents to experience this for the first time, since they various directions of movement are enabled and cut off at random; which is something Perry is more than willing to abuse and capitalize on.

Strength/Weakness:
+ As someone who strives to become an individual who stands against the Grimm when others run away, it shows in his fighting style. He can take hits, dish out the hurt, and stand tall all while doing so. Head-on combat is where he truly shines, and Perry wouldn’t have it any other way.
+ Despite his fighting style, which has been described as a bit ungraceful, Perry is rather intelligent. While not necessarily booksmart, he is observant, logical, and a thinker. He’s also relatively open-minded and flexible in his thoughts, and thus quite accepting of almost any individual.
+ Hardy, resilient, and tenacious. He had to be in order to survive, and Perry is a survivor at the core, even before his aspiration to become a Hunter. Pain just means he’s still alive, and better keep it that way. Hunger brings purpose, thirst gives him drive, and fatigue is just motivation.
- While he does understand the need for stealth at times, Perry is just rather bad at it. Maybe it’s just he’s too big, or it just goes against his nature, but whatever it is, he’s just not meant to skulk around like others.
- While not necessarily slow, speed is not one of Perry's strong points. Against speedsters, he doesn't have a chance to catch them and if basically reduced to waiting for the perfect time to counter. They'll be able to keep their distance fairly easy, but just because he can't catch them doesn't mean he can't react.
- His Semblance can be somewhat of a double-edged blade. He won't use it against opponents he's obviously outclassed against, but if the situation turns for the worst, Perry is stuck and unable to retreat until his Semblance wears off; he has no way of cancelling its effects.
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Forsythe said
srsly use the skype, set-me-on-fire person, i can respond to a popup instantly, here i only check once in a while xD I suppose the wings could be seen under the coat if you are looking carefully, she doesn't exactly make a point in hiding them because due to history she may be quite known throughout at least one kingdom. Still you probaly have to notice her adjusting the harness or know what to look at. At present time her back is against a seat so it's pretty much unnoticeable.


I think I added you, I'm just using my phone from work.
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harinezumikouken said
Kuhaku


I'd like to see a change to Trap Glyphs before acceptance. Something about having 10 mines that last a few hours doesn't sit with me well: I'd like them to not be trip mines, and instead require Semblance activation. Even a thought would be good enough, but I dislike the idea of having to 1) keep track of ten mines as a GM and 2) having a 300-foot-radius area that's impenetrable. Requiring mental activation would create more counterplay by allowing the mines to be snuck past or allowing enemies to charge through from multiple entrances (such that Kuhaku can't focus on every entrance quickly enough to catch them all).

If your character weren't such a powerful close-combat specialist with very little counterplay (his counterplay being "keep at range" but he has a zero-cooldown gap closer to make this a silly proposition), I'd be alright with the Trap Glyphs as proximity mines: in fact, I'd vastly prefer that. The idea of being extremely powerful when fighting on your own turf or if you're given enough time to setup is a balanced fantasy that hasn't been addressed by the other characters. But being that and extremely powerful without your Semblance is a stickler for me.

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The Semblance doesn't feel like it fits the character. But, it's also so low-powered that I don't feel like there's anything wrong with it except for a missed opportunity. Just understand that no matter how amazing your character is, for balance reasons you're likely to lose if your opponent has their Semblance up, since you make the tradeoff of better sustained damage for lacking the burst and power of a Semblance.

Zombehs said Perry Symund

I like the character as long as the duration of the Semblance is reduced considerably. I feel like one minute should be the longest duration.
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Kiddo said I like the character as long as the duration of the Semblance is reduced considerably. I feel like one minute should be the longest duration.

Sure, change has been made. Dropped it down to a few seconds, so it's more for disorientation than trapping him and his enemies.
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@Kiddo - I appreciate the constructive criticism. Do you mind if I PM you and hash out the finer details to adjust Kuhaku's Semblance?
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@Kiddo - what, in your opinion, would be a more fitting semblance?
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If you add me on Skype (Termott) I can add you guys to the group chat we have!

Gosh, this really expanded! Nice seeing more faces!
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Termott said
If you add me on Skype (Termott) I can add you guys to the group chat we have!Gosh, this really expanded! Nice seeing more faces!


Unfortunately, I'm completely unable to utilize Skype for reasons I can't and don't want to discuss.
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@Kiddo - I appreciate the constructive criticism. Do you mind if I PM you and hash out the finer details to adjust Kuhaku's Semblance?

Sure thing.

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@Kiddo - what, in your opinion, would be a more fitting semblance?

If you Skype (or PM, I guess) me we can discuss this in private
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Kiddo said
Sure thing.If you Skype (or PM, I guess) me we can discuss this in private


PM has been sent.
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