[OOC] RWBY: Deep Blue

[pyre101]

http://www.roleplayerguild.com

[Kiddo]

Please do not direct unaccepted bios to the character repository. We should save it for bios of characters who are actually in the game.

[pyre101]

Srry. The link was not up. I have edited it out.

[Henzukaya]

Zombehs said
Eh, changed it back to this then. Added another weakness.

I don't see any further problems with it. Kiddo, if you don't see anything else wrong with it, its accepted

pyrak

Stop right there. Just no. No. For starters, why are you submitting two characters at the same time? As for the other stuff...
-Your character's appearance is a little too long and unnecessary, mainly the bit with the tattoo. Its just downright confusing.
-Your personality is suicidal. Huh. Well. Guess what. No.
-Your semblance is pretty much another person's Semblance (LokiLeo789's) just edited a little, and even if it wasn't, its just a little overpowered how you can use any kind of force and send them flying, like Goku breathing on Yamcha. No.
-What the hell does being streetwise have to do with anything??
-So. You're a loner. Fun.
To summarize: No. Plain old no. Even if you edited it a lot, just no. There'd have to be something good to anchor it to to change it, and so far there isn't anything. We don't need someone brooding at the window on rainy days thinking suicidal thoughts and glaring daggers at everyone. No.

As for your second character...
-Hair is always a grabbing device, unless its shaved off completely or almost shaved off completely.
-WHY ON EARTH IS YOUR CHARACTER 6'8"?? IS THAT EVEN PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE, AND IF IT IS, IS IT EVEN REASONABLE FOR A CHARACTER TO BE THIS TALL??
-Just because you claim to be a hardcore badass does not mean people will see you as a hardcore badass. Often times others will see you as some all talk, worthless showoff. And others that aren't me would see you as mildly annoying and maybe a little arrogant.
-How on earth is your long and thin poleaxe (Which should be called just a long battle axe) able to turn into a crossbow??
-All your Semblance means is that you're a volatile battery. What are the uses of that??
-Huh, for once something on your characters I all right. For once.
-THAT sentence was arrogant itself. You're saying its justifiable that shes overconfident because she's not overconfident, she's just too skilled. Get on my lvl n00b. No.

Long story short, for both characters, it has come to my realization that there is not enough negative words in the dictionary, and possibly the entire languages spanned across all of mankind to describe perfectly your characters, so I will leave it at a nice and friendly No.

Ok, as of now, character submission is pretty much officially CLOSED. We may open up sometime later, but for now, just no.

[Henzukaya]

pyre101 said (correct usage, btw. Just like a female dog = bitch)

Just be careful not to use this term on any canine Faunus. It would be amusing as hell, but yeah, you might get the shit beaten out of you and no, I won't be there to help as GM.

[BrodZ11711]

i'll be able to start RPing tomorrow

[pyre101]

Henzukaya said
Just be careful not to use this term on any canine Faunus. It would be amusing as hell, but yeah, you might get the shit beaten out of you and no, I won't be there to help as GM.

I definitely won't. I was just using that as a out-of-game reference for those who might get offended. And if Kael did say that, well, he would frankly deserve it and I may allow him to die for it. However, he is a caring person so I doubt it would happen.

[Henzukaya]

pyre101 said
I definitely won't. I was just using that as a out-of-game reference for those who might get offended. And if Kael did say that, well, he would frankly deserve it and I may allow him to die for it. However, he is a caring person so I doubt it would happen.

Thats a shame. Although ym character might use that term for someone.

[LokiLeo789]

Hey my post might be a little boring, I'm sorry for that, I'm kinda having writers block right know.

[Henzukaya]

just a notice: Unless informed otherwise by the Guild or someone higher up in the guild, I'll leave swearing and curse word use up to you guys. If you wanna use it, go for it.

[Pyromania99]

Henzukaya said
just a notice: Unless informed otherwise by the Guild or someone higher up in the guild, I'll leave swearing and curse word use up to you guys. If you wanna use it, go for it.

Typically as far as IC posts are concerned, they let it go as long as it's not a "swearing swear on a swear sandwich while swearing swear swear swear swear to swear a swear swear sideways" or something like that with actually words. That's just downright excessive though so I'd agree.

[AliceZaru]

MEOWWOW

[Henzukaya]

Please use this OOC for actually relevant posts. For instance:

AliceZaru said
MEOWWOW

Is not a relevant post at all. If you would post anything like MEOWWOW, please use the preferred translation of NYANNAN. I have a feeling that avatar is Azu-nyan, so surely you know of Nyan

[harinezumikouken]

@Henzukaya & Kiddo - Should I just do a rework/re-imagining of Kuhaku's personality altogether or leave it be?

[harinezumikouken]

I've edited out what Kiddo requested and have changed the image for Kuhaku's CS with a better, full-body image.

[Henzukaya]

All righty, good to go. Don't forget to post your character in the character Deposit

[BrodZ11711]

Henzukaya, set up a scenario were a new student will be attending AKA me :)

[Henzukaya]

BrodZ11711 said
Henzukaya, set up a scenario were a new student will be attending AKA me :)

Uhh... don't need to we're all just getting off the airship.

[Henzukaya]

Zombehs said
Perry awoke to the world of the waking without a trace of drowsiness, blinking once as he reoriented himself. It would appear that the airship had just landed itself, and Perry turned to look out the window to confirm that, yes, it indeed had. The towers of Beacon Academy stood tall in the distance while, closer to, he could see other students disembark the airship. Hopping off the ledge, he landed lightly on the metal floor with nary a sound, his only bag clutched in hand. The comfortable weight of Blast Bicell could be felt on his back, so he was all but ready to depart. Feeling it would be more appropriate here, in this empty hallway, than on the middle of the port Perry decided to stretch a bit. While his mind might not have needed any time after his nap, the same couldn’t be said for his body.The step outside felt much better after he had taken the time to stretch a bit, working out the kinks that had formed during his brief nap. His scarf was wrapped loosely, but completely so it didn’t drift in the wind and possibly smack others in the face. Still he stepped off to the side and out of the way to drink in the sight of the prestigious Academy. It was much larger in scale than anything he had seen, though that said little given where he was from. Still, once the awe had faded and he had shaken his head to clear it, Perry followed after the rest of the airship’s passengers.

Kinda abrupt and confusing, but everyone please ignore this post. There was a mix up and confusion in the OOC Character Deposit, and I have put Zombehs on the waiting list. To keep things in flow, I'm keeping the post here, since he is still a character in the story, but until an opening is confirmed, his character will stay uninvolved with the plotline.

I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my own incapabilities. Also, BrodZ11711 and harinezumikouken, please post your characters in the Character Deposit as well as anyone else who's character has been accepted.

[harinezumikouken]

Henzukaya said
Kinda abrupt and confusing, but everyone please ignore this post. There was a mix up and confusion in the OOC Character Deposit, and I have put Zombehs on the waiting list. To keep things in flow, I'm keeping the post here, since he is still a character in the story, but until an opening is confirmed, his character will stay uninvolved with the plotline.I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my own incapabilities. Also, BrodZ11711 and harinezumikouken, please post your characters in the as well as anyone else who's character has been accepted.

Posted.