[OOC] RWBY: Deep Blue

[Kiddo]

AliceZaru said She lacks in speach and the only way she can communicate is by simple hand movements or body motions.

Once again, not GM, but this is not a great idea. How do you plan on playing this character in such a way as to make our characters understand her? Generally mute characters are the hardest thing to get right, and I've never met someone who did it well enough to make the "I'm special!" balance out with the "This is freakin' ridiculously hard."

[Henzukaya]

Termott, welcome back! As for your character... Everything seems really nice, but the Semblance seems out of place. I feel like there could be something better and a lot more useful for your character other than invisibility. can you think of anything else you would want if you couldn't have invis? PM me for suggestions if you need some

AliceZaru, I really like your character so far! Always a pleasure for a blank mind to be filled, taught, and molded by their surroundings. The Semblance I'm somewhat confused by. The description was also somewhat unclear. If you could specify it and what it can do precisely that'd be a huge help.

Edit: Just noticed what Kiddo is talking about. Yeeaaah, a mute character will be weird. It can work, depending on how well you can execute something like that, but I don't think it would go so smoothly. If you could, please remove the muteness from your character

[Henzukaya]

1Charak2 said
Ill get to work (lupus argentum is based of the big bad wolf so wind manipulation

Ah, I see. Of course, you do understand that if it were to be wind manipulation, then you wouldn't have complete control over some things. You could disrupt it, alter its course, but you can't completely redirect or stop it. I think that would be too broken

[Termott]

Henzukaya said
Termott, welcome back! As for your character... Everything seems really nice, but the Semblance seems out of place. I feel like there could be something better and a lot more useful for your character other than invisibility. can you think of anything else you would want if you couldn't have invis? PM me for suggestions if you need some

Awesome!

Would perhaps something along the lines of a force field, or rather an outward projection of aura to use as a shield work? Like Violet from The Incredibles? Pretty much the same bubble thing, but of course with a time limit and the bigger the object is, the harder it would be to create.

[Henzukaya]

Termott said
Awesome!Would perhaps something along the lines of a force field, or rather an outward projection of aura to use as a shield work? Like Violet from The Incredibles? Pretty much the same bubble thing, but of course with a time limit and the bigger the object is, the harder it would be to create.

That would actually work beautifully with that character. She seemed more like a tanky character anyways. Go for it.

[Forsythe]

Made some polishing edits, hopefully all right now.

[Henzukaya]

Forsythe said
Made some polishing edits, hopefully all right now.

Accepted and added

[AliceZaru]

Henzukaya said
Termott, welcome back! As for your character... Everything seems really nice, but the Semblance seems out of place. I feel like there could be something better and a lot more useful for your character other than invisibility. can you think of anything else you would want if you couldn't have invis? PM me for suggestions if you need someAliceZaru, I really like your character so far! Always a pleasure for a blank mind to be filled, taught, and molded by their surroundings. The Semblance I'm somewhat confused by. The description was also somewhat unclear. If you could specify it and what it can do precisely that'd be a huge help.Edit: Just noticed what Kiddo is talking about. Yeeaaah, a mute character will be weird. It can work, depending on how well you can execute something like that, but I don't think it would go so smoothly. If you could, please remove the muteness from your character

Alright! I'll do some touches..just give me about 8 ours cause of school. Cx

[The Red Seelie]

Henzukaya said
Ah, I see. Of course, you do understand that if it were to be wind manipulation, then you wouldn't have complete control over some things. You could disrupt it, alter its course, but you can't completely redirect or stop it. I think that would be too broken

That the point less op

[Henzukaya]

1Charak2 said
That the point less op

Ah. It didn't seem that way in your description. It looked like you had complete control over something in midair.

[The Red Seelie]

Henzukaya said
Ah. It didn't seem that way in your description. It looked like you had complete control over something in midair.

Yeà thats cause i haven't started changing it yet... From velocity to wind

[Henzukaya]

1Charak2 said
Yeà thats cause i haven't started changing it yet... From velocity to wind

Ok, after that it'll pretty much be approved.

Speaking for which, the number of entries is quite large, and I want this to be a really fun roleplay, so I'm increasing the number of player teams by 1, meaning 4 more available spaces. I am also hoping to have another co-GM, one for each team. Kiddo, I would be honored if you would fill the position, as you seem to have a great understanding of what a roleplay needs. However, if you decline,and if anyone would like to do the job, let me know.

[Kiddo]

Power to state my opinion without having to preface it with "I'm not a GM but..."? OF COURSE I'LL TAKE IT *maniacal laugh*

Do we have Skypes? That's the easiest way for me to communicate with people, especially if the forum goes down.

[pyre101]

Is this still open? I have been trying to find RWBY RP for a while, but none available. If yes, I can throw up a CS hopefully by today if not tomorrow. I'm at school. = P

[The Red Seelie]

working on wind im thinking on having it as almost invisble extension to his blade.

[Scarifar]

I think so. Feel free to make a character. Preferably a human one, because we seem to be having an influx of faunuses (faunii?).

[The Red Seelie]

new semblance finished

its called zephyrs fangs cause of the second active effect.

[pyre101]

Okay. I was going to go human nevertheless. I don't really know all the races so yeah.

[Kiddo]

1Charak2 said
zephyrs fangs

Alright, I see a lot of people doing this, so let's discuss this:

Everyone who has access to their aura can create shields.

If you want especially-strong shields, that can be a semblance, but we don't need people tacking them onto their semblances just because you want shields.

With that said, specifically about Zephyr's Fang:

Zephyr

You're trying to put too much into this ability. You add utility (momentary platforms), offensive ability (extending his blades), and defensive ability (damage reduction from weapon redirection). It looks like you're still suffering from not quiet knowing what your fantasy is, so let me just ask you outright: what is this character's core identity? Is he a jumping-around-on-invisible-platforms ninja guy? Is he a whirling dervish of wind blades who's nigh untouchable? I feel like we're very close to something, but three abilities in this one seems a bit too scattered. If you want to keep all three, I'm going to go ahead and touch on the balance problems that I see.

[The Red Seelie]

Kiddo said
Alright, I see a lot of people doing this, so let's discuss this:Everyone who has access to their aura can create shields.If you want especially-strong shields, that can be a semblance, but we don't need people tacking them onto their semblances just because you want shields.With that said, specifically about Zephyr's Fang:

Hes a all out offensive i now have a idea to edit