[OOC] Naruto: Clash of Wills

[DiamondBlizzard]

I am and was asking a question, I assume it's a no, apparently having Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Shakuton is OP. I am willing to tone down, but seriously, I don't want to destoy my character.

[DiamondBlizzard]

I am and was asking a question, I assume it's a no, apparently having Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Shakuton is OP. I am willing to tone down, but seriously, I don't want to destoy my character.

[Redwing]

I'm not saying you can't have multiple specialties. I'm saying you can't have bullshit ultimate defensive jutsu that can block everything. Even the so called ultimate defense jutsu have weaknesses. 8 Tri-Grams Rotation can't block attacks that come from below. Gaara's sand thingy doesn't work if you do enough damage to get through it. Or as we learned from Deidara, if something gets inside it before it completely closes, Gaara is screwed.

You're bullshit defense techniques have no apparent weaknesses. Which, as I have said many times during these past few posts, is bullshit.

[Demon Shinobi]

DiamondBlizzard said
I am and was asking a question, I assume it's a no, apparently having Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Shakuton is OP. I am willing to tone down, but seriously, I don't want to destoy my character.

The specializing isn't the problem.

The problem is you attempt extra hard to make your character amazingly undefeatable with techniques that seem to barely have any effect on him to tire him out or cause fatigue. Even if they should have you added two items with techniques of there own which you claimed could use without the user's chakra or at least wrote it in a way that made it seem like that. Overall, it seems that you're trying way too hard to give your character over the top OP abilities and items and essentially make them on par with Naruto and Sasuke towards the end of the series.

Because of the reason's listed I would not allow you an antagonist nor do I wish to allow your character to remain a part of the RP any longer. This matter is over, no debate, goodbye.

[Zarkun]

Let the angry posting begin.

[Redwing]

Here is the temporary to permanent replacement for Diamond's character. If anybody new wants to take her spot, we'll simply say she had to be transferred to another team.

Appearance:

Haruka

Haruka stands at about 5 feet tall and weighs a little under 100 pounds. Thin and gangly with not much in the way of a girlish figure. Simply replace the weird symbol under her eye with the red fang marks of the Inuzuka. I would have used a better picture but was what I found that I liked. Also, because you can't see them, she's wearing black ninja sandals on her feet. Like all of her clan she has sharpened canine teeth and claw like nails.

Her dog does by the name of Tsuki and looks like this.

Name: Haruka Inuzuka

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Rank: Genin

Skills: Tracking, like all of her clan she's good at both literally and figuratively sniffing people out.
Animals, she's absolutely great with animals, mostly dogs, especially the kind that have been abused in the past.
Speed, she is pretty damn fast, one of if not the fastest in her class at the academy.
Agility, she can run, jump, and twist her way around the battlefield with ease.

Specialty: Taijutsu and tracking

Jutsu: Clone Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Four Legs Technique
Beast Human Clone
Tunneling Fang

Equipment: Haruka carries around the normal ninja tools, along with a seemingly endless bag of dog treats, that does actually have an end.

Kekkei Genkai: The Inuzuka don't really have a Kekkei Genkai. But I'm going to consider the fact that they can talk to dogs one.

Other Clan Traits: As mentioned above, the Inuzuka possess sharpened canine teeth and claw like nails. They have heightened senses, especially their sense of smell and by channeling chakra into their nose can strengthen it even further.

Personality: Bold and sharp tongued, Haruka isn't afraid to say whats on her mind and tends to both speak and act before she thinks. Loud and friendly, she tends to get physical with her friends and shows affection in sometimes violent ways. But she really does mean well. She's caring and motherly, especially towards animals. But will always be the first to laugh when somebody, including herself does something stupid. She's nearly fearless, which causes her to do something rather stupid things at times. She'll listen to the advice of others, and though usually ignores it, will appreciate it all the same. Just because she chooses to ignore authority figures and rules doesn't mean she hates them. Its just more fun that way.

History: One of Haruka's earliest memories was meeting her lifelong companion Tsuki. The two fell in love almost instantly and been side by side ever since. Nobody is really sure where her red hair and eyes come from. Considering they don't know who her father is (Don't worry, none Gaara or an Uchiha) and her mother died shortly after giving brith to the girl. But they don't really care. Its pretty damn obvious that she's an Inuzuka. During her academy years she made friends easily but also angered a lot of people due to her personality. She was always at the top of her class when it came to speed or tracking people down. In Taijutsu she was still above average. But Ninjutsu and most definitely Genjutsu lacked big time. She's more of a one trick pony than a well rounded fighter.

Other: Like her doggy companion, Haruka is colorblind. Though mostly keeps it to herself, since it isn't really what she would consider an important detail about herself.

[G3njii]

Ryoku(Antagonist)

Name: Ryoku Ju-Kido
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Rank: Jonin
Skills: Misdirection, Cooking(its his secret hobby)
Specialty: Taijutsu, Jutsu, Chakra Control
Jutsu:
E Rank Basic Jutsu's
Gravity Style: Gravity Field Jutsu
-Creates a field of increased gravity surrounding user
-Stronger the g-force, the smaller the field
-Weak g-force is applied to a wide area to provide a sensory type effect(User can sense movement within the field)
-User is unaffected by Gravity Field

Gravity Style: Forceful Shift Jutsu
-Changes the direction and force of gravity on target
-Must make contact with target
-Last merely a few moments
-Can use on self(for transportation and combat purposes
--(I could launch myself just enough to mimic super strength with it and seeming super speed, it would add a layer of trying to examine and figure out my characters skills cool for development)

Gravity Style: Black Hole White Jutsu
-Requires a Decent chunk of focused chakra
-If any chakra is molded into a technique or jutsu while charging, then user must restart charging(This limits user to Taijutsu and Evasive maneuvers)
-Range at most 10 miles, User must have been at the destination once before.

Gravity Style: Pocket Dimension Jutsu
(For a later point most likely)
-Utilizing the space between the black and white holes, he can store things.
- It takes a bit more chakra to store things inside this dimension then it does to just travel through it
-Larger things require more chakra
-Does not take as long to charge and use as teleporting does

Gravity Style: Orbit Epicenter
-Tags a target with seal, this seal will cause all thrown objects(by myself) to head straight for my target like he is the epicenter of the gravitational field
-Has to make physical contact
-Seal can be removed if noticed
-Target can avoid objects if they can make the object hit something else on the way to him. Has to be large enough to actually stop or change the course of the flying object
(ex. after marking you i could start sending rocks your way, because the rocks were small you could block them with kunai shuriken, etc. But say I throw a boulder, you would have to line up with a tree or a wall causing the boulder to hit the wall and lose its effect)

Gravity Style: Zero Gravity Chamber
-Creates a dome of g-force pushing inward preventing escape
-Inside dome gravity is under complete manipulation(To the points of up/down and other directionals, intensity, and abolition of gravity.) Through training this could be focused on individual targets within the dome
-Last Ditch Effort as it leaves user nearly completely exhausted of chakra
-Lasts 10 minutes at most(at 10 minute mark it automatically disperses due to lack of chakra) (Can end earlier to preserve chakra)
Equipment:
A Collapsible staff, Goes from standard bo-staff height, to half that height.

Kekkei Genkai: Gravity Release Nature
Other Clan Traits: N/A
Personality: Likes to toy and tease his opponents. Can be a bit of a goof finding humor in odd times. Explosive anger, while having a good control over his emotions, if one manages to decently piss him off he gets very destructive and violent
History: When Ryo was a young boy he had a natural talent for jutsu. He lived in small town outside one of the larger villages, they didnt have a large shinobi team but the ones they did have were skilled enough to protect the village and take on missions for livelihood. Ryo's parents however were not ninja nor did they have any skill for it at all, but with Ryo's natural talent they didnt want it to go to waste so he spent alot of time with the shinobi who guarded the village. They taught him the basics and it wasn't long before they discovered Ryo's very unique Kekkai Genkai, a Gravity release chakra nature.

It was due to this that tragedy had struck his life. His ability caught the eye of spies and villages tried to get their hands on the kid, it wasn't long before disaster had decimated the village and more specifically his family. If one asked Ryo who was responsible he wouldn't know, he had hid like a coward, to afraid to even protect his family. All was not lost though, there was a light at the end of the tunnel. That light was a Leaf Ninja, he offered to take the boy under his wing and to train him. Ryo wanted nothing more than to be strong, strong enough to protect people. So he left with this Ninja to train and be a part of something bigger.

For years Ryo was trained in secret under the soon to be Hokage's watchful eyes, for years he was really alone and not just because he was kept separate from others, but also because he didn't want to ever have to feel a pain like that again. So he trained diligently, developing his jutsu and learning to fight among the best. The Hokage became like a father to Ryo and though he never intended to feel that again, he loved him like a father too. In his solitude though Ryo grew fairly dark and twisted, most people wouldnt accept him the way he had become so he never worried about making allies either, he worked alone or with the Hokage and that was enough for him. As Ryo grew of age he traveled alot, he went out to see the +other villages and see the world as much as he could. Always ready to help his 'Father' had he needed it, always ready to protect the innocent, and in his eyes there were not many who were truly innocent.
Other: Ryo's sanity is stretched thin. From the events he witnessed as a child, to the solitude he endured, to the evils he thought he could see across the land. His mind could be sent over the edge anytime now.

[G3njii]

Does this mean we are ready to start :D

[Demon Shinobi]

G3njii said
Does this mean we are ready to start :D

I need to make my Jonin... But I probably won't be able to do it tonight.

[DiamondBlizzard]

That's what I wanted to know, apparently I've no need to revise as I'm basically banned. Alright then, I bid you good day Demon, Redwing.

[Demon Shinobi]

Sorry, but we're gonna be a bit delayed. My internet and everything is down and it is beyond difficult to create a character or really do anything on my phone. I'm going to try and get at least started on everything today, but we might not be able to start yet.

[G3njii]

Still overly excited ha

[Demon Shinobi]

Alright wanted to start today, but I'm not sure it can be done.
For now the two teams are as follows.

Team 1
Jonin: Jerin Uchiha
Genin: Nagato Uzumaki, Genjii Ryzhao, Haruka Inuzuka

Team 2
Jonin: Mitsuki Nara
Genin: Shiori Uzumaki, Yakuya Akimichi, Makoto Hyuga

Definite Start tomorrow :3

[G3njii]

If you get a first post in tonight i should be able to reply, but tomorrow is always good too ha

[Demon Shinobi]

Not really in a coherent state of mind for posting :P
It's 2AM lol
Probably gonna go to bed now XD

[Duthguy]

I have made some minor adjustments to Yakuya's CS namely links to the Narutopedia pages describing his jutsu's and I've added a hollow bamboo tube (to breath through while using Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) to his equipment.

[Masaki Haruna]

I am hyped! Shiori sexiness coming in.

[Demon Shinobi]

Duthguy said
I have made some minor adjustments to namely links to the Narutopedia pages describing his jutsu's and I've added a hollow bamboo tube (to breath through while using Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) to his equipment.

Nice job Duth. Still accepted thanks for the update.

Masaki Haruna said
I am hyped! Shiori sexiness coming in.

Lol awesome x3

[Demon Shinobi]

Hey guys...
What's that?
Is that...
Is that an opening post in the IC?
I THINK IT IS! X3

[Zarkun]

I'll be honest, it's tempting to make Jerin like Kakashi with reading a certain book XD