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@Casterlyrock- how big are the dragons and read the rules(There is something that must be included in order for a character to be accepted)
@DaDrummer- Can you expand a bit more on what you are saying and how it would work with the plot of the roleplay.
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And about my villain? Don't know how you feel about people having more than one character. This villain will tie in with my hero and won't appear for a while. I just want to go ahead and create him.
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As long as you let me know when and what you plan to do with him then it's fine.
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they would be about the size of a iguana
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Kitty said
1. Savage wouldn't be alive this is a while after sorry if I forgot to iNclude that

Vandal Savage is immortal. So though he may not be involved in your plot he would still be alive. :p
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Ultimate Spidey said
is immortal. So though he may not be involved in your plot he would still be alive. :p

I'm just trying to keep Canon characters out of this, I know he's immortal....
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oh didnt think i needed to do it again, when i used scandal savage as mine for my first CS
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Name: Jacque Magoro
Alias: Leucrotta
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Abilities/Skills: EXTREMELY good at tracking, also good with fixing vehicles
Powers: Can transform into a hyena like creature that is roughly the size of a horse, he can chew through all but the hardest materials
Weaknesses: His heightened senses leave him vulnerable to loud sounds and strong smells, he can't fit into small spaces in his Leucrotta form, he also tends to get a lot more aggressive the longer he stays in this form
Equipment: Nothing on him cept' the clothes on his back
Personality: Jacque can be brutally blunt, standoffish and somewhat antagonistic upon first meeting, but as time goes on and he gets a chance to warm up to people, he becomes eager to please and is surprisingly sweet.
History: Jacque grew up in Port Elizabeth, South Africa, he was a relatively happy child with an easy life, his mother and father ran a highly profitable catering company, and as a result where pretty well off. All seemed to go well until his thirteenth birthday when he began to exhibit strange behaviors and physical changes. His mother merely chalked it up as puberty, and to an extent she was correct, but his father knew much more than that, and sent him to live with his grand parents in Botswana. Jacque, as it turns out, comes from a long line of bestial creatures known as Leucrotta, it was thought that when his father was incapable of transformation that the line had ended, however with Jacque becoming more aggressive as his full transformation neared, his father knew it would be best to send him to people that would help him 'cage the beast'. He lived in Botswana for roughly three years before returning home. His mother, still not aware of his other side, decided that he was too far behind when it came to his education and decided that he would learn best in a school outside of Africa. The result? Sending Jacque to America. He's been there for two years now, living with his Aunt from his mothers side of the family.
Relationship(s): None in America besides his Aunt
Appearance: Jacque - Leucrotta
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Monsieur, we already have an theriantrophic member. As in, mine. Kitty wants each member to be unique.
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Sling is correct. I'm sorry just trying to keep it interesting
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@casterly- *facepalm* my apologies accepted
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Are you still looking for a character?
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Snipped.
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Your power is op... I just can't accept it. The character seems way too op
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Would it make you feel better if I took away the crushing a school part, along with the regeneration? It's literally telekinesis. I simply put it in detail...
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I still just get an OP vibe. just give me some time to think it over and read it over a lot more
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I've edited it. Hopefully it's up to satisfaction.
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I regret to say that I'll be forgoing this RP for the time being. I hadn't quite planned out any back up Cs's in the event that this was rejected, an error on my part. Thanks for actually telling me that you already had a member with similar powers rather than flat out saying no though. :)
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I'm sorry about my rule I'm just trying to keep everyone unique. If you do ever think of a character and there is room you are welcome to submit it
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Soul said
Abilities/Skills-
Immense knowledge over battle tactics, magic both physical and spiritual, and the human body. Also has quite a bit of knowledge of martial art forms and weaponry katas. Has a genius-level intellect, and an IQ level higher than most. Can react to events almost instantaneously.

Everything bolded makes me either confused or seems like too much.
Strike outs are fine
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Control over his own Mental Capacity, involving Telekinesis and it's variants.

By saying telekinesis and it's variants it seems like a lot.
Read this, this is telekinesis. http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Telekinesis. Which is way too much
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Weaknesses
Not the best in social interaction, and a bullet to the brain would also do some damage.

Strike-out is fine.
1. The bolded is a normal weakness so you can't really put that, it's stating the obvious.
2. I specifically put that you need at least 3 weaknesses.
Please don't take me not accepting you yet the wrong way. You made a creative character but it is too OP for a roleplay about young, teenagers learning how to control their powers
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