[OOC] Heroes of Beacon - the Next Chapter

[KabenSaal]

You know, when one woman is going crazy and cutting down bitches whenever she sees them, it's the perfect opportunity for some young, missable person to slip in and out without being seen in the confusion.

[HereComesTheSnow]

True

but why do that when we can panic

[KabenSaal]

Panicking and watching the crazy fox girl dance Death and shoot blood at the guards with bridled fury is also good.

[HereComesTheSnow]

perfect

[harinezumikouken]

Panicking and watching the crazy fox girl dance Death and shoot blood at the guards with bridled fury is also good.

@KabenSaal

Alright, now y'all got me interested in following your mission.

[HereComesTheSnow]

By the end of this everyone is gonna be keeping an eye on RCJM

we're not here to take part

we're here to take over

[harinezumikouken]

By the end of this everyone is gonna be keeping an eye on RCJM

we're not here to take part

we're here to take over

@HereComesTheSnow

Very interesting.

[KabenSaal]

Yush! I want to find some Wormhole that'll get Shiro to drop into the Casino just as Mokuren finished, then have her act all shy maiden like while covered in blood and entrails of a dozen people.

[HereComesTheSnow]

don't do it shiro

yandere is bad news

[harinezumikouken]

don't do it shiro

yandere is bad news

@HereComesTheSnow

B-but I love yandere. And tsundere for that matter.

[KabenSaal]

don't do it shiro

yandere is bad news

@HereComesTheSnow

Mokuren isn't a Yandere. She is more like a Kuudere/Dandere

[harinezumikouken]

Yush! I want to find some Wormhole that'll get Shiro to drop into the Casino just as Mokuren finished, then have her act all shy maiden like while covered in blood and entrails of a dozen people.

@KabenSaal

Where's Paris Hilton when you need her?

"That's hot."

[HereComesTheSnow]

see tsundere i can get but yandere man?

nah bruh

nah

@KabenSaal
My mistake, forgot the proper usage of yandere for a bit there and focused on the whole blood-covered deal

[KabenSaal]

Being blood covered because they looked at your beloved the wrong way is Yandere. Just saying hi after slaughtering a bunch of evil bastards is not.

[HereComesTheSnow]

Yeah that's what I was saying I screwed up

[Ookawa]

I was hoping to portray Skyra as a tsundere ;) Look forward to fun, I hope!

[HereComesTheSnow]

Getting the feeling Luke gonna play the straight man much more than anticipated. Let's see, tsukkomi, audience surrogate...

Maybe he fills the "smartass best friend who doesn't do much else" role

We'll see.

[harinezumikouken]

Now, brings up a good question. If every sentient being had aura which protects them. Would that guard have been gravely injured? Unless Mokuren has powerful aura crushing abilities. In fact, would Sapphire have been injured at all?

[HereComesTheSnow]

Maybe the aura wasn't awakened. Doesn't it need to be before you can unlock its abilities?

[Agent B52]

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Just out of curiosity what did you think of my entry specifically? Specific criticism is helpful for improvement. A pat on the back, not so much.

@Prince of Seraphs

Two things stood out to me in the negative sense. First off and the chief reason Morpheus did not win was the way it is presented. There is no sense of what would be known for sure IC and what would be conjecture. I just did not get the impression this is what would be what you hear around a campfire, or an interview with a survivor, or even a mission briefing.

Second, and this one is entirely a personal gripe, I dislike humanoid Grimm. That one is in no way a thing you could have known beforehand but due to a number of very poorly written RWBY fics and characters, humanoid grimm have negative connotations in my head.