[OOC] Heroes of Beacon - the Next Chapter

[HereComesTheSnow]

no guts, no glory

[Forsythe]

Welp, decided to give Marcus the chance to stop it instead of going and blowing the truck right up, team leader and all xD

[Ookawa]

lol, @Eklispe That comic you made is pretty funny, I have to admit ^.^

[Eklispe]

Its so bad its funny XD_{gawd its so bad :*(}

[Ookawa]

Its so bad its funny XD_{gawd its so bad :*(}

@Eklispe

The outfit you chose for Skyra is hilariously bad xD

[harinezumikouken]

lol, @Eklispe That comic you made is pretty funny, I have to admit ^.^

@PyroDash888

Comic? Where? o3o

[Ookawa]

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Comic? Where? o3o

@harinezumikouken

The challenge?

[Ryonara]

Its so bad its funny XD_{gawd its so bad :*(}

@Eklispe

It's painfully funny how appropriately you summarized it.

[Ookawa]

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It's painfully funny how appropriately you summarized it.

@Ryonara

See how bad we are? We need to step up our game ^.^
xP

[MULTI_MEDIA_MAN]

Diamond used Rally!

It's super effective! Oswald is no longer despaired!

[Sho Minazuki]

I think that people aren't barbaric and don't just chuck mental into an asylum forever. Such a mental illness would have therapy, assistance, treatment. Not just being launched into a dark hole forever. So, maybe at worst she is put on the sidelines for several weeks/months as she recovers, but not vanished forever. But, I was more in the mind of active assistance, in the school, helping her over come it while still keeping her around.

@KabenSaal

Let me speak with you further.

First, making a violent character isn't generic, unless you make it so. Just because it is a common trait people write into characters, doesn't mean it's boring. Making Mokuren randomly go into the corner nibbling on nothing absolutely BREAKS her quiet and (actually already...) violent character. Yeah your character is already violent, go the whole way.

But again, it's only generic if you make it so. There are many ways you can make it have more depth than simply someone who lacks the inhibitions to attack another person. For instance violence was perhaps the only thing she knew until recently, and as a result is now seeking to change this and put herself under better control. Maybe she's violent because of a strong sense of justice, that justice should be paid in blood, and that soon she will see that violence isn't the only answer.

You need to think about your character's moral compass if you want to make an interesting character. Change, or seeking change, also makes an interesting character, because it's development that readers can gauge. So again, a violent character isn't boring unless you write it that way. Just because it appears to have been done many times, does not make it a bad thing. I'll give you some examples in RWBY itself.

Weiss is a rich girl who is somewhat snobby. Oh I think I've seen this in... Most animes these days?

Yang is a spunky popular girl. I think she's in just as many animes as Weiss' character is.

Jeanne is actually a combination of two. Though he exhibits mostly 'main character' traits, like hidden potential and rising to the challenge when the need arises, especially when close friends are involved. At the same time he is the butt end of some jokes like the... Main character's close friend.

Our Silver guy who kicks, and his partner, are very very obviously the strong cool villains we see in most fighting or combat animes and even shows, and Roman is like a British Joker. Absolute balls at combat, but he's kind of a mastermind. I just wish they wrote his plans better, because it all just looks like a bloody gambit and asspull sometimes.

This is something people don't seem to understand these days. It's all about execution now. It is incredibly difficult if not impossible to make an original concept now. You should take concepts that are already used, and explore them in new and different ways, or try it in a way that may be interesting, rather than immediately dismissing it as 'boring'.

Next off, I know people with mental illnesses, one of which is my cousin. Literally the only thing stopping him from being put into an asylum is family, and because his affliction isn't so bad. At the very least he does not seek harm upon others. If there was a mental affliction where the patient sought to harm others or themselves, I guarantee you they would be put under the highest amount of scrutiny depending on the severity.

But in any case, tell me why you think she should have this cannibalism? I will say that it is probably okay, as long as she is actively seeking help, if you choose this route. Ozpin must be knowledgeable about your condition, for obvious reasons will be kept secret from anyone else, but your actions will not be met without consequences if you choose to eat another person. Whether or not Mokuren reaches out to anyone on her team or other people, will be entirely up to your character.

[Lucius Cypher]

You know, it's not cannibalism if all you want is justification to literally bite people's faces off. Scary and barbaric? Sure, but let's admit it, your mouth is pretty good at the whole "Ripping flesh apart" thing. Sort of what they normally do anyways. If Gren didn't wear a full-face helmet all the time he'd rip and tear people apart with his teeth too.

[Sho Minazuki]

But the problem is that she's not even like a shark or bear faunus that would be good at such things, not to mention her mouth would still be human.

[harinezumikouken]

But the problem is that she's not even like a shark or bear faunus that would be good at such things, not to mention her mouth would still be human.

@Sho Minazuki

-Snickers- God, I need to have my dirty mind cleansed.

[HereComesTheSnow]

Maybe she's a Maori

[Guess Who]

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-Snickers- God, I need to have my dirty mind cleansed.

@harinezumikouken

Dear God harine, I've seen teenagers with cleaner minds.

[harinezumikouken]

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Dear God harine, I've seen teenagers with cleaner minds.

@Guess Who

Blame it on the Corps.

Shit, I think Eleanor Roosevelt even once commented on us.

Yup, here it is

My Hider

http://www.goodreads.com/quotes/119060-the-marines-i-have-seen-around-the-world-have-the

[MULTI_MEDIA_MAN]

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Blame it on the Corps.

Shit, I think Eleanor Roosevelt even once commented on us.

@harinezumikouken

Can confirm, Corps is dirty-minded as fuck.

And I never even served.

ALSO, Team RPGD successfully completed their mission, despite what that total dick from the White Fang said as they were leaving.

[Guess Who]

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Can confirm, Corps is dirty-minded as fuck.

And I never even served.

ALSO, Team RPGD successfully completed their mission, despite what that total dick from the White Fang said as they were leaving.

@MULTI_MEDIA_MAN

So does that mean we each get 5 credits? You said your goal was to make it a S ranked mission, I can't help but feel that it leaned more to being an A ranked mission though.

[Ookawa]

I wonder how long the patrol mission will take, if we only seem to be getting out one post per week or so.