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"Welcome. Welcome, to City 17 The Fourth Dimension Role Play. You have chosen, or been chosen, to relocate to one of our finest remaining urban centers role plays. I thought so much of The Fourth Dimension Role Play, that I elected to establish my administration, here, in the OOC, so thoughtfully provided by our benefactors. I am proud to call The Fourth Dimension Role Play my home. And so, whether you are here to stay, or passing through to parts unknown, welcome, to the role play. It's safer here."

Ignore that bit above if you haven't played Half-Life 2. ;)


But seriously, welcome to City 17!

I've looked over your application, and feel that is all up to our standards! Though you didn't mention what facility you're going to, I am safe to assume it is the same facility all of our characters have just become a part of.

Your application is:


"I pledge allegiance to the Pageclaim of the United Role Plays of roleplayersguild, and to the republic for which it stands; one Pageclaim indivisible with liberty and justice for all."
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Haha, I still haven't had the chance to play Half-Life 2 yet, but I am hoping to soon. The game sounds awesome! Yep you are correct, it is the same research facility that everyone else is at. Thanks for the accept!
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Haha! RAGNA! I see you've returned! Where have you been dude? Hope everything's been okay.
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Hey there buddies. I haven't had the time to check up in quite awhile. Without going into great detail, stuff is going on in my life. Some good stuff and a whole bunch of lame bad stuff, but we all go through that.

Anyways, and I know I said it before, but I'm getting back into it. I believe I've got the time and drive to continue Kristof.

As for the application from Gambit, everything seems in order to me.Although I could be delicious delirious from a lack of sleep.
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Unraveller. Please don't call yourself delicious again. That really freaked me out. lol

So, that's a 2/3 for the votes. Only 1/3 vote left for acceptance! Or 1/3 vote to force her to make edits and go through the process again.
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lol thanks for the accept!
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*Whistle whistle whistle*

Ragna?
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WHAM! LET'S GET MOVING PEOPLE!
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Cool post. Though, do you realize Ragna is MIA? He's in three RPs, all mine, and no one has heard from him in any of them. We're going to wait a little bit longer before continuing. And if we do, I'll PP him into some situation or something he can come out of when he returns.

*Waves to Jollan*
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I didn't realize it, darn. Well, COME BACK RAGNA!
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Aye, we all need him back. Too bad threatening spoilage doesn't summon him...
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haha *waves* yep, ive been running between work and school and paintball scenarios lately, lol. I'll get a cs up here soon so I can start rolling with y'all. And I mean soon... not that kind of soon that means a week from now. I wouldn't give y'all that false hope haha
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Awesome man!

Yeah, no problem on the delays. One of our co-GMs is MIA right now, so we wouldn't even be able to accept ya anyway. If he seriously doesn't come back soon though, we'll continue without him, and accept you without him.

Glad to see you taking an interest in all my RPs. ;). Shall I link you to the one not on this sight? ;)
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I wouldn't see why not, a good active rp keeps the writing juices flowing.
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Cool! It's nearing the end though, but we're pushing faster and faster now. If you want to try and get in, you can try. Once it ends we're going to restart on this website, 50 years into the future with new characters (Or the old ones if they are still alive.)

Herobrine

Don't let the name get you. Seriously. We've come so far, that it's barely Minecraft related. It's not even blocky or anything like that. It's just themed with the occasional Villager, Enderman, Creeper, and the all-powerful Herobrine. Oh, and Notch/Jeb Related religions. xD
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Username: Jollan
Character Name: Garsin
Character Age: 32
Character Gender: male

Appearance: Though, make his hair darker and ignore the weapons.

Fourth Dimensional Power: sight and sound
Bio: From a foreign family, but raised in Japan. Ever since he had his operation, he had found that he could see things other people couldn't, but it was written off as impossible because, originally, he was told he had amplified taste. He was involved in the first military engagements against the strange creatures as a field medic. Loss after loss, however, had him retire. It wasn't until his home was attacked and family killed by forth dimensional creatures, that his power was re-evaluated to confirm he had the power of sight, not taste, and surprisingly enough he was starting to develop sound as well. The mistake was from a mix-up in documents. Due to this, Garsin was annexed from society and placed under lockdown for his and others' safety. Though he is in an underground cell, it is made quite cozy like a small cabin on the inside with fake windows that are screens that display the outdoors. Barely a month passed before a group called Team Alpha contacted Garsin, promising him a shot at getting some revenge on the strange creatures. Garsin was ready and willing to get revenge on them, however, after being part of the group for a long time one of the only friends, and partner, he had in Team Alpha was was fatally injured on the field. When asked to leave him, Garsin disobeyed orders and tended to the man's injuries and extracted him as well. Garsin saved him but was promptly fired upon his return, though Garsin quickly shot back, saying that it was fine by him because if their weapons weren't such crap that they wouldn't have been in that situation in the first place! After so much death, loss, and failure, he decided he would stay in his "cabin" until he finally died. But as fate would have it, that would soon change as well...

WHEN DEPLOYED: He is equipped with a heavy two handed energy sword (think phantasy star) and a sidewinder-like heavy gun (like the weapon on titanfall, but uses bullets), both magnetically held onto his back. He also carries extra energy cells for his blade. He also has a medical satchel that hangs at the back of his belt. His sword can last a bit on one cell, but has a special ability to turn into an energy hammer. once it is in hammer mode, he can deal a devastating attack but it eats up the whole cell on contact. He carries a total of 5 energy cells. one already loaded, and four extra.

Also, he can no longer stand strong cheeses because they all remind him of the horrific training video about fourth dimensional toe cheese.
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woah, 430 pages..... im not reading all that lol
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Try to read it, and your head will implode a thousand times over. Really. The first few tons of pages are EVIL.

Wait, 430 pages? There's only 31 here in OOC, and about 3-4 on IC. What are you talking about?

I can wrap up a quick catcheruper for ya, especially since we're redacting a LOT of what happened.

As fer your app, I have a few questions... but not right this second.

Okay, your app.
You've mentioned Sight, Sound, and Smell as your abilities. He was 'told' about smell, but did he ever actually have it? Sight and Sound... when did he acquire those two? Did he get both at the same exact time, or one right after the other, or one years and years afterwards? It's likely your character had at least one ability when they were born, if his parents had some. Though in rare cases he may have missed that gene.
As for a secret-group of military fighting the 4D creatures, that never happened. When the creatures first came, only regular military fought, and failed horribly at every turn. Then, the company who invented the technology started gathering up special powered people to help get rid of these monsters... for the sake of the company. They have been deployed little often, and only in the recent few years.
You can, if you wish, start out in that facility as another roleplayer joining (Who is now ACCEPTED! YAY!) is starting out there as a scientist. You could be part of one of the already existing groups... perhaps taken off duty temporarily for conflicting with your past group. You could even have been part of Team Alpha, which is the 'bully' group at the site (Which I haven't told anyone about yet, so ding! Spoilers!), and either still be in their group, or having conflicted.
As for the weapons. NO NO NO NO NO. No coming up with awesome ideas that do not conflict with the technology ideas I had at all in any way. BAD BOY. You're not allowed to do that! I like them. ;). You might say you left your group because your weapons malfunctioned (AKA, why they're so weak... yes, those weapons are actually pretty under-op lol), and have to get an upgrade from the head-scientist before you can be redeployed.
More specifically about your character... can you explain his nationality a little more? The RP is centered in Japan, but it's clear he's foreign. So we'd like a little hint as to where he's from... unless you want to keep that hidden until IC, which is fine. ;)

Edit 1:

Oh wait, I just noticed the ROCKET LAUNCHER. That might be a bit OP. Most operations take place within the city of Tyoko itself, where they want to keep damage down to a minimum (Especially since no one knows they exist.) So... perhaps not that gun.

Edit 2:

Okay people. I've just gotten word with Ragna, and things are very very bad for him. He won't be able to post anymore, unless by luck and as cameos. He may be back in full swing in a few years, but only Toe Cheese knows.... We'l continue without him, and just use his character in the background.

Also, Gambit, yes, I did just say you're fully accepted in that post. Welcome aboard!
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i was talking about herobrine being 430 pages, lol.

Huh, the sidewinder I always thought was just a heavy, armor piercing machine gun, my bad.in the game that is kinda how it functioned with small 25 round belts that were fed through it. I guess I never read the description, just used it lol. well, instead of the micro missles, we can go with regular large caliber bullets like I thought it was, haha.

As for him being in an experimental military group, I'm fine with scratching that. It was right before work and I was just trying to throw my first thoughts together before I had to run out the door. He wasn't staying there anyway. What if I had him recently fired from Alpha for disobeying orders because he extracted/ gave medical attention to someone on the field even though he was told to leave them behind, and he said that it was fine by him because if their weapons weren't such crap that they wouldn't have been in that situation in the first place! ...lol

ok, as for powers, he's had sight for a while (since his first operation), but he was documented as having taste, due to a mix-up of documents. It was later confirmed after his home was attacked, that the reason he was attacked was because he actually had the power of sight, which he believed all along, and somehow was starting to develop sound. Sound isn't completely there or anything, just faintly. I don't believe I mentioned smell at all.

As for his weapons, I think he is going to change his sword in for a gravity hammer type weapon because where you can't cut something you can sure as heck hit it with blunt force. because blunt force says "F YOU ARMOR!" i dunno. I haven't decided yet.

I separated everything so that it was easy for me to keep up with lol. Would those changes sufice? I'm gonna hold off on editing the cs until its right so im not doing it multiple times.

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Oh, lol. Yeah, don't read those either. Same issue until page 100 or something. lol

Oh, lol about the sidewinder. Yeah, those changes would work.

As for the group idea, that would work. I can see the Alpha guys getting really angry at him for having disobeyed orders. Perhaps your character and the person he saved are friends?

Oh, taste. I thought you did say smell, not taste. Doesn't matter really. But okay, those changes will work. Just make sure it's clear. ;)

You can change the weapon if you like, ;)

Those changes would suffice.
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